Strong

Strong

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is one of the first songs I wrote that helped me get through my first break-up. Like Taylor Swift I have a hidden message for this song and it is: you gave me the strength to move on <3

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Strong:
I never knew, love was kept hidden,
In special little places, you can never seem to find,
Well baby, I wasn't kiddin',
When I said, I'd never change my mind,
Well darling you changed my life,
Slowly, one step at a time,
Who knew it was just a lie,
Who knew you'd make me cry,
All night long
Oh oh ohh ohh

Cuz chances come and chances go,
And moment flash by,
In the blink of an eye,
You don't wanna miss out,
On the moments that shape your life,
The good times help you love and care,
While the bad times make you stop and stare,
Oh darling what a shame,
But with all of the pain,
You made me strong

You told me I'd be yours forever,
But I guess forever doesn't last too long,
Cuz you crushed me more than ever,
And now my life has a sad theme song,
I tried to make it right,
And prayed every sleepless night,
That you would somehow stay.
But you had to make it end that way
Oh ohh

Now chances come and chances go,
And moment flash by,
In the blink of an eye,
You don't wanna miss out,
On the moments that shape your life,
The good times help you love and care,
While the bad times make you stop and stare,
Oh darling what a shame,
But with all of the pain,
You made me strong

Now I fall asleep each night,
Dreaming 'bout that name,
Tell me do you see the black and white,
Written on the page,
That we are meant to be,
Tell me why'd you leave me,
And I'm fallin' down so low,
Now time's moving by so slow,
Oh oh

But chances come and chances go,
And moment flash by,
In the blink of an eye,
You don't wanna miss out,
On the moments that shape your life,
The good times help you love and care,
While the bad times make you stop and stare,
Oh darling what a shame,
But with all of the pain,
You made me strong,
Oh oh, oh oh, oh oh,
You made me strong <3

© 2013 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
I hope you guys enjoy it. If not it's alright. I basically did this for me to let other people know about my songs so if you don't like it it's ok... I just hope some people do :3 haha


Okay so recently I've decided to start re-editing my songs so that they have some structure so I started with this because it's my first song! I hope you like it! :)

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Oh oh this is a good song. I dig it lady. I would love to hear the music behind these words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! :) And I plan to really soon!
"Oh darling what a shame,
But with all of the pain,
You made me strong,"

really inspirational, moving lines over here :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :)
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.
This is really very good!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing babe!! you are so inspiring!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very good, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was beautiful, i read on your page your inspiration is taylor swift?

well i think she would be very proud of this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good! This should definatly be put to music. Good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 4, 2012
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