This is a song about my ex boyfriend! Hope you like it! The hidden message is: Freshmen can't go to prom <3
You Can Go Alone
Tell me why do I waste my time, If you really could care less, And bottle it up on the top shelf, Baby I'm trying to my best, I'm trying to be everything, That you want me to be, But there's some things I can't change, Some things are gonna stay the same, But darling don't walk away, Cuz I want you to stay
If you don't want me to go, Then you can go alone, But don't ask me, If you can bring another girl, You say I'm your world, Say I'm everything you want me to be, But if that was true, Then why would you, Share the romance with her, And not with who you call your girl
I wonder what you would do, If I told you I was crying, Would you apologize, Or would you lie, And tell me you're truly sorry, I was ready to make you, My whole life, But if you can't do this one thing for me, Then what are we gonna be
If you don't want me to go, Then you can go alone, But don't ask me, If you can bring another girl, You say I'm your girl, Say I'm everything you want me to be, But if that was true, Then why would you, Share the romance with her, And not with who you call your girl
When you're dancing around, With your hands on her waist, Underneath those rays of shining light, Will you regret, what you said, Will you imagine that it's me, Or will you keep dancing, Till you don't know what my name is, Will you forget about me, Please don't forget about me
If you don't want me to go, Then you can go alone, But don't ask me, If you can bring another girl, You say I'm your world, Say I'm everything you want me to be, But if that was true, Then why would you, Share the romance with her, And not with who you call your girl
Baby if that was true, Then why would you, Share the romance with her, And not with who you call your girl <3
Okay so if you don't feel like reading this you don't have to but I'm just warning you that I'm gonna go into a very long rant. Okay so as you can tell from the words and the description this song is about my boyfriend who didn't want to take me to prom because I was too young. He's a junior and I'm a freshman, and apparently freshmen aren't allowed to go to prom. He also informed me that Sophomores aren't allowed to go either, as if that would make me feel better. So yeah let's start from the beginning of the story. One night we were hanging out in his room and out of no where he just casually asks me "So is it alright if I take Derek to prom with me?" and I really didn't know what he was talking about because as far as I knew, his friend Derek had a girlfriend. And Doug was just like " Screw his girlfriend because I want to go with him" It was weird hahaha. I didn't really know what to say so I just said no :P And then.... -_- Doug says "Well then can I bring this girl from Spanish named LJ?" -_- Apparently he already asked her during class by getting down on one knee and asking her to prom... Like arreeeee you kidding me? Who tells their girlfriend that they asked a different girl to prom and wonders why she's not okay with that? Ugh I was pissed beyond belief! I started like flipping out at him and all he said after that was "Well, I mean, I guess I can take you, but my friends are gonna make fun of me" Ughhhh sorry this is pissing me of just thinking about it ahah! So yeah I was just like "um okay?" and he immediately changed the subject. I tried bringing it back up because I was really pissed off and he was just like "ugh, let's not talk about this" and for weeks after that every time I saw him he would bring it up non stop. *sigh* Sorry just really pissed off right now haha! So I'm finished with my story now. Hope you enjoyed my rant!! Feel free to comment and review! :)
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OMG OMG OMG
hahahah I love it....
IDK how to explain my feelings during this part:
When you're dancing around,
With your hands on her waist,
Underneath those rays of shining light,
Will you regret, what you said,
Will you imagine that it's me,
Or will you keep dancing,
Till you don't know what my name is,
Will you forget about me,
Please don't forget about me
Like I wanted to punch him in the face but I also wanted to see what you would do if he actually brought one of them... Anyways haha great job!
Ugh I know! haha this song gives me the ultimate feels!! Every time I read it I either get really ma.. read moreUgh I know! haha this song gives me the ultimate feels!! Every time I read it I either get really mad or start bursting out crying hahaha.. and yeah by the time I was writing that 3rd verse I was just like sobbing hysterically writing this haha and I really wish that you know he did stay with me longer so that I had the chance to punch him in the face :P and thanksss! < 3
11 Years Ago
HAHAHA THAT'S HYSTERICAL :P and sad :( but yeah seriously what an.... wait for it... AIRBAG lolololo.. read moreHAHAHA THAT'S HYSTERICAL :P and sad :( but yeah seriously what an.... wait for it... AIRBAG lolololol cracks me up every time... what smoke are you crackin'? haha
I read and felt that you were shocked by the manner of the boy.
The emotional out pour was perfect and the resulting song was really a unique
creation.It was directly from your heart.
I appreciate the piece.
OMG OMG OMG
hahahah I love it....
IDK how to explain my feelings during this part:
When you're dancing around,
With your hands on her waist,
Underneath those rays of shining light,
Will you regret, what you said,
Will you imagine that it's me,
Or will you keep dancing,
Till you don't know what my name is,
Will you forget about me,
Please don't forget about me
Like I wanted to punch him in the face but I also wanted to see what you would do if he actually brought one of them... Anyways haha great job!
Ugh I know! haha this song gives me the ultimate feels!! Every time I read it I either get really ma.. read moreUgh I know! haha this song gives me the ultimate feels!! Every time I read it I either get really mad or start bursting out crying hahaha.. and yeah by the time I was writing that 3rd verse I was just like sobbing hysterically writing this haha and I really wish that you know he did stay with me longer so that I had the chance to punch him in the face :P and thanksss! < 3
11 Years Ago
HAHAHA THAT'S HYSTERICAL :P and sad :( but yeah seriously what an.... wait for it... AIRBAG lolololo.. read moreHAHAHA THAT'S HYSTERICAL :P and sad :( but yeah seriously what an.... wait for it... AIRBAG lolololol cracks me up every time... what smoke are you crackin'? haha