Wild

Wild

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is a song I wrote about my last boyfriend. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: Oktoberfest <3

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Wild

As I lay my head down,
On your chest,
I can feel your heart beat,
I feel it skip and I feel it pound,
And it's all because of me,
You're driving me crazy,
Just the way you are,
Cuz it's the way that you love me,
That makes me wanna never leave

Baby you're crazy,
You're a wild one,
And when you're looking at me,
It makes my heart come undone,
You're making me crazier,
And crazier with every single move,
Baby you're a wild one,
And you're making me wild too

Baby you're twirling me around,
You make my heart spin,
As you tell me things,
That I've never heard,
Cuz only you,
Can make me feel this great,
Make me feel like I'm loved,
Cuz you know just what to say,
To make my heart go crazy

Baby you're crazy,
You're a wild one,
And when you're looking at me,
It makes my heart come undone,
You're making me crazier,
And crazier with every single move,
Baby you're a wild one,
And you're making me wild too

You put a smile on my face,
Every single day,
Cuz of those things you say baby,
Even though you've only,
Known me for a little while,
It's those little things you do,
That made me fall in love with you

Baby you're crazy,
You're a wild one,
And when you're looking at me,
It makes my heart come undone,
You're making me crazier,
And crazier with every single move,
Baby you're a wild one,
And you're making me wild too

Baby you're a wild one,
And you're making me wild too <3

© 2013 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
So last year at Oktoberfest, well the Oktoberfest in 2011, I was sitting with my family extremely bored while I was texting my friend Miranda. Her name on here is Panda1234212112 I don't know the numbers :P but yeah so I was texting her! And she was talking about how she was listening to the song Wild One by Flo Rida and I've never even heard it before but this chorus popped into my mind and I had to write it down. Since then I haven't found any inspiration to finish it until I met my last boyfriend Doug. This year I took him to the Oktoberfest and we had a really great time! A few days later I finished this song while at the dentist (random odd fact I some how remember). Now whenever I read this song for some reason it reminds me of our day at Oktoberfest! :) Soooo anyways :P I hope you like it!! Feel free to comment and review! <3

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OMG I KNEW THIS WAS FAMILIAR! Haha I remember you texting me and everything... That was so long ago omg... and You're so close with my username hahaha I love this it's so cute :) And when you say crazier I think like twice or something I thought of T Swizzle singing Crazier in the Hannah Montana movie. Just thought y'all should know.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Haha yeah I remember ranting to you about it :P and yeah that was over a year ago! And I think I did.. read more



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Krista, I do believe this is a love song, I'll give you chords for it later if you like? Since I hear you are learning guitar!

I can condescend to say "Baby" maybe, just this once?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! And sure if you'd like!! :P
Its a perfect song that will go well in the late teen pubs and charts. set it to music and its a hit!

its power packed with just the right choice of words that are famous this generation.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much!!! :)
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

yer welcome
Wow, very good write. Nice write as well!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
OMG I KNEW THIS WAS FAMILIAR! Haha I remember you texting me and everything... That was so long ago omg... and You're so close with my username hahaha I love this it's so cute :) And when you say crazier I think like twice or something I thought of T Swizzle singing Crazier in the Hannah Montana movie. Just thought y'all should know.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Haha yeah I remember ranting to you about it :P and yeah that was over a year ago! And I think I did.. read more

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