You Were The First

You Were The First

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is a song I wrote a while ago about my last boyfriend. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: First true love <3

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You Were The First

Just when I'd given up hope,
That I'd ever find a guy like you,
That's when you came around baby,
And it was so unexpected,
That I didn't know what to think,
But before I knew it,
I just couldn't get you off my mind,
But baby why would I

You were the first,
Hand that held mine tight,
The first who I'd know,
Stay up with me through the night,
The first date, the first kiss,
The first dream that I'll never let go,
Cuz baby you were the first,
Who was kind to me,
And was in the relationship,
For what it was supposed to be,
Cuz baby you were the first,
Man who really loved me

I love the way your fingers,
Feel perfectly entwined in mine,
They give me butterflies,
Just about every single time,
And I feel so comfortable,
Cuz I know this is,
Where I'm supposed to be,
So never let go of it baby

You were the first,
Hand that held mine tight,
The first who I'd know,
Stay up with me through the night,
The first date, the first kiss,
The first dream that I'll never let go,
Cuz baby you were the first,
Who was kind to me,
And was in the relationship,
For what it was supposed to be,
Cuz baby you were the first,
Man who really loved me

And baby when your face leaned in,
I felt my heart skip too many beats,
I could taste your lips on mine,
And it felt so magical baby,
That I didn't want to stop,
I couldn't pull away,
Now the next time I see you,
That's all I want to do

You were the first,
Hand that held mine tight,
The first who I'd know,
Stay up with me through the night,
The first date, the first kiss,
The first dream that I'll never let go,
Cuz baby you were the first,
Who was kind to me,
And was in the relationship,
For what it was supposed to be,
Cuz baby you were the first,
Man who really loved me <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
This is one of my favorite songs! I wrote it when I just started dating my ex boyfriend. I pretty much wrote it about how happy I was that I got to share all of my firsts with him. I've had a couple other boyfriends in the past but I never did anything with them. Never hugged them. Never held their hand. Never kissed them. Never went on a date. The most I did was I met my first boyfriend at the halfway mark between our houses. So when I found my boyfriend Doug, it was perfect. We met, then started talking, then held hands the third time I saw him. We hugged, and went on dates, and he gave me my first kiss. And there is no doubt in my mind that he was my first love. And even after we broke up this song has stayed one of my favorites. Yeah I was mad and upset and every other emotion that could possibly exist, but he will never stop being my first true boyfriend and my first true love, and I won't ever stop caring about him not matter how bad it ended.

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hope you can record your songs
so i can hear it
haha
nice
=]

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

I hope to start making some of the music soon! :)
amazing write ...cute and beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Wow this is really amazing,
I can feel the melody, like the flow of words also.
Awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
Aww this is soo sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks!! :)
Aww this is soo sweet!I like it very much!It made me think about my first love.:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks! :) I'm glad you could relate! :)
AAAWWW While I was reading this I was thinking "This is sad but it's happy at the same time..." Really great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Yeah :) haha and thanks!! :)

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