Fighting

Fighting

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is a song I wrote about my dream to be a country singer/song writer. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: I can make it <3

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Fighting
It's been my hope for the longest time,
That's why I'm,
Standing in front of you now,
I've traveled all this way,
To see if I can make it,
So don't give me some lame excuse,
Just tell me the truth,
Cuz I really gotta get there,
So don't stop me right here
Well I won't stop,
I will fight,
I'll just keep standing here,
Fighting tonight,
I won't let my dreams,
Escape between my fingers,
I promise that I won't let you down,
If you just give me that chance,
But if you don't,
Just know I'll keep on fighting
I was born to be a singer,
It's in my blood and genes,
And I grew up in the country,
That's how my parents raised me,
If you combine the two,
That's what I'm meant to do,
So this is what I'm meant to be,
So don't ruin this dream for me
Well I won't stop,
I will fight,
I'll just keep standing here,
Fighting tonight,
I won't let my dreams,
Escape between my fingers,
I promise that I won't let you down,
If you just give me that chance,
But if you don't,
Just know I'll keep on fighting
I'll keep on fighting,
Till the very last day,
Keep on fighting,
Till my very last chance,
Cuz I won't settle,
For anything but yes,
Cuz I don't deserve any less
Cuz I won't stop,
I will fight,
I'll just keep standing here,
Fighting tonight,
I won't let my dreams,
Escape between my fingers,
I promise that I won't let you down,
If you just give me that chance,
But if you don't
I won't stop,
I will fight,
I'll just keep standing here,
Fighting tonight,
I won't let my dreams,
Escape between my fingers,
I promise that I won't let you down,
If you just give me that chance,
But if you don't,
Just know I'll keep on fighting <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
So ya this is pretty much about my dreams of being a country singer. One day I was thinking about it and thinking about how I'd be able to get there. I was thinking about Nashville and Music Row and about the terrible process of constantly being denied. And I just kept thinking about how now matter what I would never give up my dreams no matter how many people tell me that I can't make it.

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These lyrics are nicely structured and rhymed. Very strong and powerful message; full of determination and ambition. It would be cool if you added a bridge as well, since you seem to only have verses and a chorus. If you like Taylor Swift and country music, you should listen to the Dixie Chicks. They are awesome even if they aren't exactly current. Lovely song, even if I can't hear the music!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :) and I have heard a few of their songs before but I'll have to listen to some more so.. read more
Naomi Bloom

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)



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These lyrics are nicely structured and rhymed. Very strong and powerful message; full of determination and ambition. It would be cool if you added a bridge as well, since you seem to only have verses and a chorus. If you like Taylor Swift and country music, you should listen to the Dixie Chicks. They are awesome even if they aren't exactly current. Lovely song, even if I can't hear the music!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :) and I have heard a few of their songs before but I'll have to listen to some more so.. read more
Naomi Bloom

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
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I really like the lyrics a lot. I agree that you should never give up on your dreams, and when people reject you, fight harder. Just remember you're a poet, so you already have thick skin lol :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Yup :P haha and thank you!! :)
I find the lyrics simply wonderful. It would truly be a beautiful song if it was completely finished(possibly with bass, guitar and piano accompaniment). I would really be a fan of this song, just by seeing this lyrics.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! And hopefully one day I'll be able to do everything for it! :)
Have you tried posting any of your songs (with instruments and everything) on Youtube? And yes - blood and genes was a nice touch - something different in your lyrics that I thought enhanced them

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Not yet. I've finally been able to start writing instrumentals for my songs but I'm not that good of.. read more
Persona

11 Years Ago

When you do I'd happily watch the videos!
This is extremely good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
This would sound great for a sound

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
this is written in a more positive way and I know you really going to make it
because of that talent
=]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much!! :)
I love this :) I can especially see you like telling this part to someone:
I was born to be a singer,
It's in my blood and genes,
And I grew up in the country,
That's how my parents raised me,
If you combine the two,
That's what I'm meant to do,
So this is what I'm meant to be,
So don't ruin this dream for me
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thanks Mirandersss :)

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Added on November 27, 2012
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