Come To Me

So this is a song I wrote a while about me dreaming my crush would leave his girlfriend for me. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: All I can do is hope <3

Come To Me

She's just like a ring,
She's wrapped around your finger,
And you can't take it off,
She's saying things she doesn't mean,
To get into your heart,
But she's playing you,
Just like a fool,
Wants you for her convenience,
But I think you see,
You wouldn't be better without me

Everyday you say,
She's not the one you want,
All my friends say it's me,
But I tell them it's not,
Well baby if you want me,
I'll let you into my heart,
But before you that,
You have to promise that,
You'll leaver her to come to me

She uses her words like knives,
To cut you down,
When she knows,
You can't get up,
She wants to love you,
With all the love that she's got,
But maybe you think,
She's not the girl that you want

Everyday you say,
She's not the one you want,
All my friends say it's me,
But I tell them it's not,
Well baby if you want me,
I'll let you into my heart,
But before that,
You have to promise that,
You'll leave her to come to me

Well if you wanna love me,
You have to leave her first,
Cuz I couldn't live with myself,
If I knew I was the worst,
Cuz there's nothing worse,
Than being a cheater

Everyday you say,
She's not the one you want,
All my friends say it's me,
But I tell them it's not,
Well baby if you want me,
I'll let you into my heart,
But before that,
You have to promise that,
You'll leave her to come to me <3

Author's Note

Mkayy so here's the story! :P So there was a whole situation at the end of the school year (like 5 months ago) where I liked this guy for a really long time and all my friends said that he was "flirting with me". I never ever believed it when they told me and eventually he got a girlfriend. According to my friends, he was still "flirting with me" once he had his girlfriend and all I could think about was how great it would be if he left his girlfriend for me. But then for some reason the idea of cheating crossed my mind and I starting thinking how horrible I would feel if the guy cheated on his girlfriend with me. I have no clue why I thought about this but I did and this is what I came up with :P soo I hope you like it!!! :)

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

well, there's always light in hopes
...just watch and be ready for the consequences
definitely a good song
=]

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you! :)

[B-poet]

Nice job. Why be attracted to someone who really doesn't value your true self. I'd take my chances with a crush. It's like taking in a breath of fresh air. A relationship change is always for the better when it doesn't work out. Well done. :)

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!! :)

[Irishbabies]

awww so beautiful can relate to it....

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks!! I'm so glad you can relate!! :)

[Irishbabies]

your welcome.... :)

[afra]

beautiful ....i love it ..well done

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you! :)

[☯]

I like the rhythm of this and it would make a really good song. You have a good tempo, and wording, good job! :)

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!! :)

[Panda11598]

Love this! You should've brought up the cheating option to him I'm sure he would've gone for it ;P totally kidding! haha good job!

[Krista Weiss]

Umm no cuz that would have been SUPER awkward!! :P hahah and thanks!! :)

[Panda11598]

Haha I was just kidding ;P when are you gonna start writing songs about doug doug doug doug doug? hahahaha

[Raminta]

I think we girls complexed creatures, it often happens to us a situation like that. However, very well put down in words. Lovely to read.

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!!