Won't Give Up

I wrote this song about how I wouldn't give up liking my crush no matter if he was with someone else. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: I'll never turn away <3

Won't Give Up

 

That one big question,

Popped into your mind,

Sometime during last Tuesday night,

But you didn't know if it was true,

So you called my friend,

To find out the truth,

But I had her lie,

And tell her I didn't love you

 

Well baby I won't give up on us,

Even when the storms are getting rough,

Cuz I've loved you for too long,

To let you get away,

To you we might have nothing,

But to me we have something,

So I won't give up that easily

 

Well baby please,

Don't hate me for loving you,

Cuz don't you know,

It's so hard to do,

Having to not tell,

The one you love the truth,

I don't want to lie but if I don't,

You might leave me standing there,

Wishing that I never came

 

Well baby I won't give up on us,

Even when the storms are getting rough,

Cuz I've loved you for too long,

To let you get away,

To you we might have nothing,

But to me we have something,

So I won't give up that easily

 

Well I don't care,

If you don't love me back,

Cuz maybe one day,

You'll learn to do just that,

And I don't care if you don't love me,

For another ten years,

Cuz I've only spent three,

Not know what it was like to love

 

Well baby I won't give up on us,

Even when the storms are getting rough,

Cuz I've loved you for too long,

To let you get away,

To you we might have nothing,

But to me we have something,
So I won't give up that easily

 

Well baby I won't give up,

Well baby I won't give up <3

Author's Note

So there was a whole situation with my crush where his girfriend found out that I liked him and decided to tell him all about it. He texted my best friend asking if I did so she lied for me and said that I didn't. After that I was like upset and stuff so I wrote this song haha :P umm soo I hope you like it!! Feel free to comment and review! :)

Reviews

[Panda11598]

:) I read this a few times before I started writing this review... love Love LOVE it!!!!! Like some of my favorite part is:

Cuz don't you know,
It's so hard to do,
Having to not tell,
The one you love the truth,
I don't want to lie but if I don't,
You might leave me standing there,
Wishing that I never came

Well baby I won't give up on us,
Even when the storms are getting rough,
Cuz I've loved you for too long,
To let you get away,
To you we might have nothing,
But to me we have something,
So I won't give up that easily

Well I don't care,
If you don't love me back,
Cuz maybe one day,
You'll learn to do just that,
And I don't care if you don't love me,
For another ten years,
Cuz I've only spent three,
Not know what it was like to love

LIKE DUDE!!!!!! AHHHH I love it! Like seriously you can tell any story in a song and have it sound AMAZING!!!! I have no ide how you do it, but you do it pretty dang well :)
I remember this... It seems like it was just last Tuesday night ;) See what I did there? Haha Anyways awesome job! Keep it coming! 100/100 as always! :D

[Krista Weiss]

Haha thanks Miranders!! :) glad you like it :P

[Olivia Rose]

Really good job as always! Youre a really great songwriter! keep ups the great work!!!! :D

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks so much!!! :)

[Irishbabies]

wow amaZayn I really like it can relate to it...:)
Good job

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks!! I'm glad you can relate!! :)

[Irishbabies]

your welcome yeah I can relate to it alot :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Holy cow! Krista, I had tears pouring out of the corners of my eyes. Wow, just wow. I really enjoyed reading this since I can totally relate. It reminded me a lot about me and Nick's situation. You know exactly what I'm talking about, too! Nick and I are only best friends now. He sees us as good friends, but I see some chemistry. I just want to walk up to him and scream" I love you! I always have and always will". People think he's weird, but he's my kind of weird though. I don't know what to do but keep loving him. Like you said, I won't give up on us. Great job with conveying your emotions into quite a beautiful song, girl!! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks so much!! I'm so happy that you liked it and that you can relate to it because when I write songs that's what I want to do!! So I'm really glad that you were able to get something out of this!! :) Anyways thanks again!! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha yeah you're very welcome and of course! I can relate to all of your work anyways :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

yes don't give it up..lovely.....nice job

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!! :)

[Cerise]

woooow...soo touching.sweet...there is hope and lots of emotions..positivness is there through out..wonderful..:)

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!!! :)