Why We Broke Up

So I wrote this song a while ago about how when you get out of a relationship you can't help but think of why it ended. So I hope you like it! The hidden message is: Give me a reason <3

Why We Broke Up

 

They're cutting down that forest,

That we used to call our home,

Cuz you know home is where the heart is,

I still remember that sunny day,

We proclaimed our love to the trees,

You carved our initials,

On the biggest tree we could find,

And when the wind blew the leaves,

I thought it was a sign that our love was true

 

Tell me is that why we broke up,

Is that why we fell our of love,

Is it because they took our love away,

Or was it because we just couldn't stay,

Do you miss me on those winter nights,

When you used to wrap me in your arms so tight,

I hope you do, but if you do,

Then tell me why we broke up

 

We didn't care if people stared,

Or if they made fun of the love that we shared,

Cuz their opinions,

Meant nothing to me,

But I guess for you something snapped,

And you forgot all the love that we had,

And I could still hear your friends,

Whispering my name as you walked away

 

Tell me is that why we broke up,

Is that why we fell out of love,

Is it because they took our love away,

Or was it because we just couldn't stay,

Do you miss me on those winter nights,

When you used to wrap me in your arms so tight,

I hope you do, but if you do,

Then tell me why we broke up

 

Tell me do you miss me,

Just as much as I miss you,

Cuz I've never stopped loving you baby,

I want to know why you,

Left me on such a beautiful day,

And didn't wait for me outside,

The next time that it rained,

I hoped you would cuz I'd know,

Or did you even know?

 

Well tell me is that why we broke up,

Is that why we fell out of love,

Is it because they took our love away,

Or was it because we just couldn't stay,

Do you miss me on those winter nights,

When you used to wrap me in your arms so tight,

I hope you do, but if you do

 

Tell me is that why we broke up,

Is that why we fell out of love,

Is it because they took our love away,

Or was it because we just couldn't stay,

Do you miss me on those winter nights,

When you used to wrap me in your arms so tight,

I hope you do, but if you do,

Then tell me why we broke up <3

Author's Note

So I hope you like it! I wrote this song a few months ago when I started thinking back again to an old realationship that ended badly and tried to figure out what made it turn out so bad. When it was over with this guy there was just a million ideas running around in my head as to why he would break up with me but I guess I couldn't get them out until I wrote this song! So anyways, I hope you like it! Feel free to comment and review! :)

Reviews

[Panda11598]

Dude do you have to be so freaking good at writing songs??? Like seriously?! It's a gift! Haha I love this. This is my new favorite. It's really creative and I could see you singing it and the whole situation when you guys broke up being the video for it. I especially like the chorus. Like the whole thing just gave me this weird feeling when I read it.
And yeah this seems like a song to me, since the verses repeat ;) HAHAHAHA but yeah anyways you're ABC awesomely brilliantly cool hahaha

[Krista Weiss]

Awww thanks Miranders!! :) haha and yes the verses do repeat :P haha anyways thanks again!! Love you!! < 3

[Panda11598]

I love you too :)

[natzky]

whoaa..this is really good all hail..:)

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks!! :)

[Irishbabies]

very nice jod serouisly though you have to teach me to write an awesome song like you cause I suck at it......very nice written :)

[Krista Weiss]

Haha thanks!! :) And I'll try to teach you :P I don't know if I know how though :P haha

[Irishbabies]

haha thanks we can try though :)

[Cerise]

Awww..its amazing..even though a lil long for me..but wonderfully written..i myself had done a poem on questions on where i went wrong in relationship wondering the reason fro brake up...it was based on questions and heartbreak...but definetly yours is amazing and much bettr...:)

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!!! :)

[afra]

i love it ...it was amazing ....my favorite one from you ....good job

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks!! I'm happy you like it!! :)

[Olivia Rose]

Really, really great! Loved this:) I really liked the beginning where you talked about carving initals into the tree. Keep up the good work! :)

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you so much!! :) I'm glad that you liked it!! :)