The Wrong One

So I wrote this when I started dating this guy who I knew wasn't right for me. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: I'd be better with him <3

The Wrong One

Finally got him off my mind,

Thought it was just in time,

Cuz me and you,

Were starting something new,

And it felt so right,

On that night,

But baby I was wrong,

Oh I'm not sure now,

Cuz being with you,

Is something hard to do

Each second I spend,

Thinkin bout you,

Is another second,

I wish I was with him instead,

Cuz with everything,

It would come naturally,

And when I'm with you,

I just don't know what to do,

Tell me will it get better,

Or did I just pick the wrong one?

Tell me you wanna bring me out,

And baby there is no doubt,

You wanna bring me to,

One of those scary movies,

Where you'll hold my hand,

Just like you have it planned,

But baby I was wrong,

Oh yes I'm sure now,

Cuz being with you,

Is something hard to do

Each second I spend,

Thinkin bout you,

Is another second,

I wish I was with him instead,

Cuz with everything,

It would come naturally,

And when I'm with you,

I just don't know what to do,

Tell me will it get better,

Or did I just pick the wrong?

Oh baby how do I tell you,

It's just too hard to do,

Oh how do I break the news,

That I just want this through,

That baby I was wrong,

Oh well I'm sorry now,

But being with you,

Is something hard to do

Each second I spend,

Thinkin bout you,

Is another second,

I wish I was with him instead,

Cuz with everything,

It would come naturally,

And when I'm with you,

I just don't know what to do,

Tell me will it get better,

Or did I just pick the wrong one?

Did I just pick the wrong one <3

Author's Note

So I hope you like it! If you read my other songs Love Me Once Again and Before I Move On, this is pretty much the epilogue for it. What happened was I liked this guy for a long time but he never liked me, and this guy I was sort of friends with had a crush on me and was always asking me out. Eventually he stopped cuz I kept saying no, but then eventually I felt stupid because I started liking him. Soon we started talking again and after a while we started going out. Huge mistake. It was the most awkward thing in the world and I found out that in relationships he's like a creepy stalker. He kept telling me how much he liked me and saying that we should go see a scary movie so that he could comfort me and the entire time I was just thinking about how much easier the relationship would have been if it had been with the other guy instead. So anyways, after my long rambling story, I hope you like it!! Feel free to comment and review! <3

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Wow, today I'm only reading poems about negative feelings xD
I guess, what you've written here is the nightmare of everyone ;)
Great song :)

[Krista Weiss]

Haha sorry :P and thanks :)))

[MandaBear]

Nice job! great write! Keep writing this great stuff as you always do. 100%

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!! :)

[Niranjan Menon]

oh nice composition

[Krista Weiss]

Thank you!!

[afra]

i get the hidden message ....well done

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks!!

[B-poet]

Having your cake and wanting to eat it too is the theme for poem. The temptation of being with an ex inregards to a new beau is driving this poor girl up the wall.
Great illustration of what's going on inside of her head. Great work. :)

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks!!! :)

[Panda11598]

LOL love the author's note about him haha And good job :) I like this... luv. See what I did there? ;) ;)

[Krista Weiss]

Ohh my gosh! No. haha

[Panda11598]

lol :)