Leave Me

Leave Me

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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So I wrote this song a while ago thinking but on my old crush! I hope you like it! The hidden message is: I tried my hardest <3

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Leave Me
I'd walk a million miles,
Across a million seas,
But you'd only walk,
A half a mile to get to me, baby,
Why do I try so hard,
And give you all I've got,
When I'm stuck loving you,
And you don't give a damn about me, baby
Well can't you see,
I'm just trying to make it right,
Don't you know that,
I miss you all through the night,
But baby, but baby,
You just sit in your room,
Watching models on tv,
While I'm staring at the phone,
Wondering when you'll leave me,
When will you leave me baby?
Had a million sleepless nights,
A million day dreams,
While you don't even care,
And are sleeping comfortably, baby,
Why do I waste all my time,
Thinkin' 'bout  you and me,
When I know that soon,
You'll be leaving me, baby

Well can't you see,
I'm just trying to make it right,
Don't you know that,
I miss you all through the night,
But baby, but baby,
You just sit in your room,
Watching models on tv,
While I'm staring at the phone,
Wondering when you'll leave me,
When will you leave me baby?
Watching every step I take,
Cuz I don't want to fall too hard,
And even though,
My mind is filled with worry,
And my heart is filled with doubt,
I still keep falling into,
You trap that you call love,
But can't you see, love?
Well can't you see,
I'm just trying to make it right,
Don't you know that,
I miss you all through the night,
But baby, but baby,
You just sit in your room,
Watching models on tv,
While I'm staring at the phone,
Wondering when you'll leave me,
When will you leave me baby?
Oh, when will you leave me baby <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
So a while ago I was thinking back to when I was dating this guy and I kinda just wrote how I felt! The song's is just kinda of about me always putting effort into our relationship when he was just lazy. This is one of my favorite songs that I have, I'm not sure why but I just love it! I started writing it during math class one day and I eventually had some guitar for it but it didn't really fit the song so I'm gonna have to change it soon! Anyways, I hope you like it!! Feel free to comment and review! <3

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Love it! I remember back when you first started writing it you sent me the first verse :) And I like the last verse too. I can picture you sitting in your room waiting for "that guy" to text you lol. And yeah I can see him watching America's Next Top Model or something hahaha

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks!! :) haha and ya I think I remember that too! And ya like legit I would text him all the time.. read more
Panda11598

12 Years Ago

OMG I can't believe he did that! :O What a loser! haha



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This is an awesome song.I really like it 100%

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thanks!! :)
I don't recall a song actually taking this angle before....good stuff

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks!! :) Glad you like it!
Does absence make the heart grow fonder? In this case it does. I like how you conveyed the emotional toll of wondering if a break-up will occur during a relationship. Great work. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
another awesome write ....i love it ....i can relate to it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks!! I'm glad you like it and that you can relate :)
Love it! I remember back when you first started writing it you sent me the first verse :) And I like the last verse too. I can picture you sitting in your room waiting for "that guy" to text you lol. And yeah I can see him watching America's Next Top Model or something hahaha

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks!! :) haha and ya I think I remember that too! And ya like legit I would text him all the time.. read more
Panda11598

12 Years Ago

OMG I can't believe he did that! :O What a loser! haha

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