Last Words

Last Words

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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So last year my friend at school moved to Alabama and everyone was like sobbing all day, including me, so I decided to write this. I hope you like it!! The hidden message is: Locker buddies <3 haha :)

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Last Words
Never thought I'd see the day,
When you decided to leave,
Never thought I'd see,
You turn you back and walk away,
But I guess it's not your fault,
Cuz you didn't have a choice anyway,
But now the sky has turned gray,
And no one can find words to say,
But please don't leave me
Got tears fresh on my face,
Old ones staining my cheeks,
But I can't fight them off,
Cuz I'm just all too weak,
And the last words you say to me,
Leave me breathless,
And I can't find words to say,
But goodbye 
I've been thinking about you,
Almost every single day,
But I can't stop now,
Cuz you've left your mark on this place,
And I can't wait,
Till I get to see your face,
But I know it won't be long,
Till you have to leave me once again
Got tears fresh on my face,
Old ones staining my cheeks,
But I can't fight them off,
Cuz I'm just all to weak,
And the last words you say to me,
Leave me breathless,
And I can't find words to say,
But goodbye
The last words you said,
Won't get out of my mind,
Cuz every time I close my eyes,
I see you walking away,
When I just want you to stay,
And with every heart beating,
Your last words,
Feel like they're slapping me,
Right across the face
Got tears fresh on my face,
Old ones staining my cheeks,
But I can't fight them off,
Cuz I'm just all too weak,
And the last words you say to me,
Leave me breathless,
And I can't find words to say,
But goodbye

And I can't find words to say,
But goodbye <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
So as I explained about my friend Kendall moved to Alabama in March. The whole day people were crying and I was fine. And then last period we had class together and she was saying goodbyes and I was still fine. Then as I was leaving to go to the bus I just broke down. I was sobbing like the entire way to the bus and on the bus. After my friend got off I was lonely and I took out my phone and the chorus just popped into my mind and I had to write it down. Later I finished it and now every time I see the song in my book I start flipping out because I miss Kendall! <33 haha anyways!! I hope you like it! Feel free to comment and review! :)

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I know how you feel about loosing a friend like that. I had a lot of friends but I had to move and I haven't seen them since. But I looked at it as I am going to make new friends. But I still like to remember the old friends and memories we had. Great Write! 100%

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! I'm glad you could relate!! :)



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I know how you feel about loosing a friend like that. I had a lot of friends but I had to move and I haven't seen them since. But I looked at it as I am going to make new friends. But I still like to remember the old friends and memories we had. Great Write! 100%

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

11 Years Ago

Thank you!! I'm glad you could relate!! :)
I love this poem. It's hard to find the words to say good-bye to someone that has had a profound impact on your life. It's hard to let them go but it's for the best in the long run. The season for that friendship of this person's life is gone now. Nothing wrong with being nostalgic down the road though. Great write. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thank you!! I'm glad that you like it!! :)
awww so sad

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG! I was thinking about her while I was reading this!!! I miss her

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

I know :'( Kendoo Victory < 3
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks! :) Glad you like it!! :)
Secret Lullaby

12 Years Ago

Yeah No Problem(:

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