Before I Move On

Before I Move On

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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I wrote this a while ago and it's basically the same situation as Love Me Once Again. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: Don't forget about me <3

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Before I Move On
It all started on one sunny day,
You walked into that classroom,
And saw my face,
Then you sat next to me,
And your heart started to race,
Had a conversation 'bout myself,
That's when I saw you make a note to yourself,
This girl is gonna be mine one day
But now you've left,
And you've gone away,
And you won't give me,
The time of day,
Won't let me tell you how I feel,
Are you playing hard to get,
Or are you really gone,
Will you please tell me,
Before I move on
It all went down,
When my heart was so confused,
I swore I was in love,
With someone who wasn't you,
You said you'd loved me,
Since that very first day,
But I couldn't figure out my heart,
Couldn't figure out what to say
And now you've left,
And you've gone away,
And you won't give me,
The time of day,
Won't let me tell you how I feel,
Are you playing hard to get,
Or are you really gone,
Will you please tell me,
Before I move on
Well baby,
How do I tell you that I love you,
Without you thinking I'm insane,
But it really is true,
That guy I used to care about,
Moved on to someone new,
And now I've realized,
My one true love is you
But now you've left,
And you've gone away,
And you won't give me,
The time of day,
Won't let me tell you how I feel,
Are you playing hard to get,
Or are you really gone,
Will you please tell me,
Before I move on
Cuz now you've left,
And you've gone away,
And you won't give me,
The time of day,
Won't let me tell you how I feel,
Are you playing hard to get,
Or are you really gone,
Will you please tell me,
Before I move on <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
So I hope you like it! You can pretty much tell in the song what the stories about. How I liked this guy since forever but then a new guy liked me but I was confused. So then I realized that I really did like the other guy but by then he wouldn't talk to me anymore. And ya eventually I realized this was a mistake, but that's an entirely different song :) haah! Anyways hope you like it! Feel free to comment and review! :)

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Well, I like this one Krista a lot! Awwh, it's sad how the whole story that you mentioned in your Author's Note happened to you. That'd be a depressing and sad situation to ever be in. I'm sorry that it happened! I do like how on his notebook it said "One day this girl will be mine". I said awwwh aloud! Haha. All of your songs are catchy and have a nice flow to them. I enjoy reading your writing too! Keep up the good work, and always keep writing :))

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Aww thanks :) haha! And ya the situation really sucked, but after I while it changed and I ended up .. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

You're welcome :) And I bet it sure did, and I'd love to know how that begun and why it ended someti.. read more



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You just described my high school days lol Very nice song! You always make good ones!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks!! :) I'm glad you could relate!!
Well, I like this one Krista a lot! Awwh, it's sad how the whole story that you mentioned in your Author's Note happened to you. That'd be a depressing and sad situation to ever be in. I'm sorry that it happened! I do like how on his notebook it said "One day this girl will be mine". I said awwwh aloud! Haha. All of your songs are catchy and have a nice flow to them. I enjoy reading your writing too! Keep up the good work, and always keep writing :))

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Aww thanks :) haha! And ya the situation really sucked, but after I while it changed and I ended up .. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

You're welcome :) And I bet it sure did, and I'd love to know how that begun and why it ended someti.. read more
ooooh I really like this :) Especially the chorus haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Haha thanks :)
great song .,...i love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
it would be a nice song , good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Added on September 3, 2012
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