Love lost. Freedom Gained

Love lost. Freedom Gained

A Poem by Kriss_Rose
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A lost unloved girl. After 7 years I wrote about it.

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It's been 7 years since the day I had enough.
I had enough of some man telling me how to live.
Enough of living unhappily because it pleased others.
I'm not an angel, I shouldn't try to be.
I had enough of someone using me for my body.
I refused to be treated like an object.
The cuts that came from leaving are still there beneath the scars.
I lost my mother. I lost my father.
Not by death but by being cast out.
I shrug it off like it does not bother me.
Yet when holidays come around, my anniversary, and just regular days I feel the pain.
You hurt me. I can't tell you this dear mother. Why? Because it would hurt you.
Why do I give a f**k? I don't know.
The fairy tale of having a loving mother and father is just that to me.
In my mind I grew up with a wonderful and loving father.
Not an abuser, pervert or an a*****e.
I grew up with a mother who was strong, independent, and confident.
Not beaten and battered.
But 7 years later I am a mother two wonderful children.
They have a father who is wonderful and loving.
I hope they see a mother who is what I wanted.
For them I will try. For me they are enough.

© 2012 Kriss_Rose


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"For me they are enough".
But, they (the kids) are not enough.
You are probably wiser and smarter than your
mother and your father, you are a wonderful example
to them. Go after them and show them what love is,
because they apparetnly never learned. You are so
much bigger than that. You have a lot to give.
Give it a whirl---- what could you lose ?

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I do not have the vocabulary to
do this writing justice.
It is incredible and the writer is the
most promising artist I have read in ages.
Thank you,
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"For me they are enough".
But, they (the kids) are not enough.
You are probably wiser and smarter than your
mother and your father, you are a wonderful example
to them. Go after them and show them what love is,
because they apparetnly never learned. You are so
much bigger than that. You have a lot to give.
Give it a whirl---- what could you lose ?

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kriss_Rose
Kriss_Rose

Barrie, Ontario, Canada



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