The Inviting Sea

Huzzah for old poems that I dug out of my folders! This was written in 2006-2007. It was actually one of the assignments we had to do.

Waters of the sea

Gentle waves lapping the shore

Invites me to join

Author's Note

Constructive criticism welcomed :)

Do keep in mind that it is old.

Reviews

[Starfruitanimal]

beautiful in just a few words i feel that sometimes..

[A Teenage Girl]

Very nice. (:

95/100