Never

Never

A Poem by Kris
"

I will never give up.

"

I can not let this misery consume me.

I will be strong in these dark times.

I will never give up.


With all the courage and compassion I can muster,

I will pursue my dreams to no end.

Nothing is going to stop me.


I will never let this misery consume me.

I will never have anything I will regret.

I rather be me and leave it at that.


Nothing can stand in my way.

I will never give up.

© 2012 Kris


Author's Note

Kris
I welcome any constructive criticism :)

This was actually written in 2011.

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Dez
i liked it. i liked the whole misery thing. it had action..... i think. but beacuse i like to crit i have to say that it needed some actions. make the charcter do something or discribe an action s/he did to express his feeling

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice flow as well as sense of endurance. Keep up the great and inspiring work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love it, a lot of ppl need the determination that's in this poem...great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kris

12 Years Ago

Thank you. Yeah, that is true. Thank you... again! :)

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