Midnight Moon

A first short part.

I am a vampire who stalks the night, I feed on the innocent and cause fear to coarse through the strongest veins... So why does my heart ache? Though it had no beat, and my skin is cold enough to chase death away, why do I feel empty? What is missing? Who is missing? I have the power to make those whom I choose hate me, love me, lust for me but what if I want it to be real? What if I, a soulless monster, want to be loved? Who is there to love me? Who will chase away my nightmares and end my eternal pain? Is there no one to save me from the demons that infect my soul? Or is my soul too infected to find a "soul mate"? These questions I fear, may never be answered...

Reviews

[Marie]

Again I like this. It flows well and somehow it speaks to the reader. I think it would flow even better if it didn't read as a paragraph to something longer.

[Lexi]

Very creative!