Am I Wrong?

Am I Wrong?

A Poem by Kane Hagwood

I must question

My own intention

Is it wrong to feel the way I do


What if I am wrong

And ruin our song

Unable to do what I was supposed to


But if notes greet as one

Dance under moon and sun

Then I will know that it is true


Why am I so shy

To face this truth or lie

Hoping hope doesn’t turn blue


Not wanting to offend

I can’t help but pretend
There may be more to you

Like a silent fox
I’ll avoid those talks
Maybe its best you never knew



© 2023 Kane Hagwood


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What a poem that you wrote, it is really beautiful , i really enjoy your poems

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kane Hagwood

3 Months Ago

Sorry for the late reply, but thank you for the kind review!
I really enjoyed and empathised with this romantic write. Beautiful.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Kane Hagwood

11 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping by for the review, Ken. I really do appreciate it :)
Enjoyed the read. Shyness can be such a curse. Especially if others are shy too. A sprinkling of courage can be a blessing. Nicely composed poetry.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

11 Months Ago

Ask Santa nicely :)
Kane Hagwood

11 Months Ago

I'll be sure to put courage (or perhaps my crush) on my list, and make sure to leave out extra cooki.. read more
Chris Shaw

11 Months Ago

Yep and a carrot for his reindeer :)
An interesting choice of rhyme scheme and well handled


Winston

Posted 11 Months Ago


Kane Hagwood

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the review, Winston. It's always appreciated :)
I like "if notes greet as one"--Sharp line there.
So often the Fox really wants to communicate to us, but they are such shy animals.
Humans can be just as shy.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Kane Hagwood

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I really struggled to get the right words out. And I'd have to agree .. read more
That sentiment, to love without hoping for love in return, is to me -- even now -- very strange, even if it occurs so often. Emotionally weighing, the uncertainty flavoured with loving passion decorates the poem as a great piece to read and relate to at times. Thank you for sharing your work, author Kane Hagwood.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Kane Hagwood

11 Months Ago

This has been a very strange year for me. At this point, whatever happens, happens. I've just had a .. read more
love the possibility this piece portrays.
hope dripping like honey off every word.
{captivating wordplay.}

Posted 11 Months Ago


Kane Hagwood

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Lav. This was a weird poem for me to write, though was somehow some of the most honest po.. read more

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Added on December 13, 2023
Last Updated on December 13, 2023
Tags: Poetry, Unspoken, Hope

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Kane Hagwood
Kane Hagwood

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