Enjoyed the read. Shyness can be such a curse. Especially if others are shy too. A sprinkling of courage can be a blessing. Nicely composed poetry.
Chris
Posted 10 Months Ago
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10 Months Ago
Thank you for stopping by to review, Chris. And you're right: shyness can be a curse. I'm still wait.. read moreThank you for stopping by to review, Chris. And you're right: shyness can be a curse. I'm still waiting on my own sprinkling of courage, which may require some time.
I'll be sure to put courage (or perhaps my crush) on my list, and make sure to leave out extra cooki.. read moreI'll be sure to put courage (or perhaps my crush) on my list, and make sure to leave out extra cookies and milk as a bribe haha!
I like "if notes greet as one"--Sharp line there.
So often the Fox really wants to communicate to us, but they are such shy animals.
Humans can be just as shy.
Posted 10 Months Ago
10 Months Ago
Thank you for your kind words. I really struggled to get the right words out. And I'd have to agree .. read moreThank you for your kind words. I really struggled to get the right words out. And I'd have to agree with you about foxes generally being shy creatures. It's always appreciated knowing I got to share my poetry with someone else :)
That sentiment, to love without hoping for love in return, is to me -- even now -- very strange, even if it occurs so often. Emotionally weighing, the uncertainty flavoured with loving passion decorates the poem as a great piece to read and relate to at times. Thank you for sharing your work, author Kane Hagwood.
Posted 10 Months Ago
10 Months Ago
This has been a very strange year for me. At this point, whatever happens, happens. I've just had a .. read moreThis has been a very strange year for me. At this point, whatever happens, happens. I've just had a lot of questions, for others and myself, I don't feel like I know how to ask. Thanks for stopping by, Leon :)
love the possibility this piece portrays.
hope dripping like honey off every word.
{captivating wordplay.}
Posted 10 Months Ago
10 Months Ago
Thank you, Lav. This was a weird poem for me to write, though was somehow some of the most honest po.. read moreThank you, Lav. This was a weird poem for me to write, though was somehow some of the most honest poetry I've ever written. Even if the words themselves convey confusion. I always enjoy hearing your thoughts on my work :)
My writing is for those who seek adventure, fun, and a good laugh from time to time. I enjoy connecting with other writers and am willing to take constructive criticism. At times, I succumb to the wei.. more..