Like A Sneaky Fox

A structured poem with an open interpretation.

Like A Sneaky Fox

In the darkness I sneak

Best intentions I seek

But for now not a peek

Other eyes are too weak

Just like a sneaky fox

I keep low as I search

Under stone will I lay

On dead tree I will perch

To find forgotten tomes

Of old worlds and old homes

This place under strange domes

What could it be that roams

To find what was once lost

I continue my task

Just like a sneaky fox

I hide behind this mask

Author's Note

This was written out of practice and fun, though I'm always open for constructive criticism. Or even just a friendly conversation. Feel free to tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

It has quite the adventurous feel to it, as if a character has embarked on a new journey of self-discovering or a new task at hands, while the scenario plays itself off as a mysterious, unidentifiably common place. Telling us that the fox is indeed great at masking itself into the surrounding world.

[Kane Hagwood]

I actually really like that perspective. Thank you for the review!

[Aura]

This is an interesting write Kane. I think the two lines which resonate with me are "Other eyes are too weak" and "I hide behind this mask." These two lines definitely summarizes what I think is the main message of the poem, which is hiding ones true self from the world. Perhaps revealing ones true self will cause fear to other's, perhaps their eyes are not ready to see what has been in front of them this entire time. But eventually, the mask comes off and what's left is this person's true self. I enjoyed this short read, it is thought provoking.

[Chris Shaw]

I think this poem is written well, with an interesting rhyme scheme. I hope you find what was once lost from behind that mask. An entertaining read.

Chris

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you, Chris. I'm hoping so too. Glad you enjoyed the poem I decided to try.

[FGFRANKLIN]

Stealthily creeping canids, Batman, this was fun. The sneaky fox just sneaking up on whatever he wants.

[Kane Hagwood]

This poem certainly was a lot of fun to write, and had a slightly playful feel when it was being penned out. Thank you for the review!

[Cheshire Cat]

Very nice rhythm! This read translated into a humorous and suspenseful orchestral piece in my head, such as John William's 'Catch Me If You Can' theme.

[Kane Hagwood]

Sounds pretty close to the music in my own head while writing it. This poem is loosely based off of a friend who absolutely adores foxes, and has joked "I'm sneaky LIKE A FOX" on several occasions. They very well might have been the inspiration of this poem, now that I'm thinking of it.... Anyway, thank you for the review!

[AManOfLove]

and thank you for providing beautiful work

[AManOfLove]

I loved your poem and thank you for your feed back i shall follow up on my story of love .

[Kane Hagwood]

And thank YOU for reviewing my poem.