This was written out of practice and fun, though I'm always open for constructive criticism. Or even just a friendly conversation. Feel free to tell me what you think.
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It has quite the adventurous feel to it, as if a character has embarked on a new journey of self-discovering or a new task at hands, while the scenario plays itself off as a mysterious, unidentifiably common place. Telling us that the fox is indeed great at masking itself into the surrounding world.
Posted 9 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Months Ago
I actually really like that perspective. Thank you for the review!
This is an interesting write Kane. I think the two lines which resonate with me are "Other eyes are too weak" and "I hide behind this mask." These two lines definitely summarizes what I think is the main message of the poem, which is hiding ones true self from the world. Perhaps revealing ones true self will cause fear to other's, perhaps their eyes are not ready to see what has been in front of them this entire time. But eventually, the mask comes off and what's left is this person's true self. I enjoyed this short read, it is thought provoking.
Stealthily creeping canids, Batman, this was fun. The sneaky fox just sneaking up on whatever he wants.
Posted 9 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
This poem certainly was a lot of fun to write, and had a slightly playful feel when it was being pen.. read moreThis poem certainly was a lot of fun to write, and had a slightly playful feel when it was being penned out. Thank you for the review!
It has quite the adventurous feel to it, as if a character has embarked on a new journey of self-discovering or a new task at hands, while the scenario plays itself off as a mysterious, unidentifiably common place. Telling us that the fox is indeed great at masking itself into the surrounding world.
Posted 9 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Months Ago
I actually really like that perspective. Thank you for the review!
Very nice rhythm! This read translated into a humorous and suspenseful orchestral piece in my head, such as John William's 'Catch Me If You Can' theme.
Posted 9 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Months Ago
Sounds pretty close to the music in my own head while writing it. This poem is loosely based off of .. read moreSounds pretty close to the music in my own head while writing it. This poem is loosely based off of a friend who absolutely adores foxes, and has joked "I'm sneaky LIKE A FOX" on several occasions. They very well might have been the inspiration of this poem, now that I'm thinking of it.... Anyway, thank you for the review!
My writing is for those who seek adventure, fun, and a good laugh from time to time. I enjoy connecting with other writers and am willing to take constructive criticism. At times, I succumb to the wei.. more..