Zeit

sort of a poem of sorts

Under deep starless night,

in a jungle of memory.

Toughts stalking shadows,

live from light I once knew.

I follow the streams that flowed sacred,

now empty.

To love's lost temples.

Where stone flowers bloom.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Juliespenhere read requested me on your poem becuz she always shares interesting new writers with me. I'm glad she does! *smile* Usually I'm not that good at reading nuanced writing, but yours is very easy for me to interpret, even tho there are whimsical ways in your writing style. I love "jungle of memory" and "stalking shadows" and "streams that flowed sacred" -- so many phrases that sparkle, despite the gloomy mood that hangs over your message (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

oh wow I love this
stone flowers is something else what a beautiful write
cant wait to discover more of your work

[angel]

Yes...and I have to say, I love the very idea of the 'stone flowers'.