Save Her

Everyone is struggling. Reach out a hand. Show them you care. Save them.

The Black Sea swallows me

arms hold me tight I’m 

cradled to the chest of

Poseidon. His body fills my 

lungs and I let it;

breath him in deeper 

I let my body fall. 

My eyes flutter shut and I

turn into the warm embrace.

My lips are moving

of their own accord: 

“Goodbye and Goodnight” they sing

one last time. 

Reviews

[...Relic...]

Could use a little work but a good image. :)

[Kathrine Rethorn]

What kind of work? :)

[...Relic...]

That second line threw me off rhythm-wise. I'll send you a private message. You don't have to reply if you don't want. :)

[Davidgeo]

Dark... but very well written. I dig it.

[Dwayne J. Keeves]

Drowning in the sea of despair. Very adequately placed.

[Kathrine Rethorn]

thank you!

[Dwayne J. Keeves]

Indeed my friend, Indeed.

[Chris]

So many have such soft and emotionally fulfilling fantasies of ending... they forget to think on who has to close their eyes and the different types of prep bodies go through based on their ends... sigh.

But, the world moves on, friends continue, and most times family really did understand but we wouldn't listen or even try to talk.

[Kathrine Rethorn]

Wow, yes this is how it ends. One way or another. Communication is lacking in our day and age.

[Chris]

We ARE human. We're made to make mistakes and sometime, just sometimes - we even CAN forgive ourselves for making them.