Bite Me Till I Bleed

Bite Me Till I Bleed

A Poem by Kathrine Rethorn

Till my blood runs 
Till I whimper: “Mercy...”
Till my iron burns your tongue 
Till it's deep enough to scar 
Till I wake up from my dream
Till I remember who you are
Till I say I love you
Till you say it back
Till you decide to stay. 

© 2017 Kathrine Rethorn


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And there the blood runs, funny how its the hearts fault it slips away, to run into the heart of another, sharing the deep red blood passion of both.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it great poem my dear

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Well I think it is a interesting twist on love. Although I have known plenty who are like this. Feelings so strong that only in pain can it be satisfied. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Hey Kathrine!
I love the title. Are you saying that you want to hurt so that you can feel again? If so I can totaly understand its so easy to get numb to the world.
Cheers
Miahstr

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Kathrine Rethorn

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the visit! The speaker is saying she wants pain, not necessarily to feel again but bec.. read more

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Added on January 15, 2017
Last Updated on January 15, 2017
Tags: dark, sadistic, love, sex, mature, masochistic, lover, bite, anaphora

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Kathrine Rethorn
Kathrine Rethorn

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My name is Kathrine Rethorn. Obviously, I am a writer. Stories and poems. I focus on realistic horror, romance, occasional erotica and mystery. Themes are usually dark or serious. I have some hobbie.. more..

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