Engulfed.

A love poem. Which, seems to be my favorite type of poem to write. :) Much thanks to Ali, for helping me through my writers block on this one.

Engulfed in silence
    silence like poison
    the poison in your smile
    your smile like sunshine
    sunshine that is burning
    burning like the fire in me
    

The fire, the passion that consumes me
    every second of every day that
    I am conscious enough to think
    and my thoughts are of you, always you
    You fill me with such love, such anger

Engulfed in love

    Yet my love is engulfed in anger.

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

100/100! I love the repetition with the words at the beginning. It's so crazy, this poem, cause of the "mixed feelings" i seem to be getting. "You fill me with such lover, such anger." I like it. Then, of course, I like how you end with the beginning in mind ;) you go back to the top form and end it perfectly. haha, wonderful poem. Passionate.