Storm clouds

My sunshine is fading
My rainbow is gone
I can see the storm clouds
The thunder is crashing
Lightning is flashing
Theres no where to hide
And its so dark to me
So dark I cant see

Author's Note

Eh. I think this one could have been better.

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

This could have been better?! This was great! :) (of course, everything can be improved, but i can't think of any other way to make this better besides... you adding more lines to it! ^^ your writing is fantastic and I'd love to read more of your work SOOON yo! Anyway! Rhyme is a big thing with me (although i dont write in rhyme much), but i love READING rhyme! Cause it captures me, it holds my interest, it makes me want to read the next stanza to resolve the rhyme! It's quite difficult to keep my attention... But all your short, meaningful and powerful poems are definitely keeping me VERY much intrigued!! xoxo