A flame.

A flame.

A Poem by Deannuh.
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Sounds lovely, doesnt it?

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                               Somewhere
                                Deep inside of me
                         Beneath the frozen wasteland
                         There is something burning
                                    A flame.
                          and whenever I am around you
                         It burns brighter than ever.
                         and butterflies flutter around it.
                                      Dancing.

© 2010 Deannuh.


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THAT ROCKS. Really, every stanza says something different, but it all adds to the final effect! They're good flames ^_^ My favorite: "Beneath the frozen wasteland/ There is something burning/ A flame." Exquisite and beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Deannuh.
Deannuh.

Perryville., MD



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