Stage 4: Development

Stage 4: Development

A Chapter by Xerclipse
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Cain has learned what Tomislav put in K-12 right before he died.

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The Angel of Death dismembers the guards one by one. He destroys everybody he sees. In the meanwhile Cain grabs Jennifer on her arm.

 

Cain: K-12 Go and take out that Angel of Death for us will you?

 

K-12: Yes sir.

 

Cain runs away with Jennifer. Jennifer looks back at K-12 but he looks back at her.

 

Cain: I need to have a word with you.

 

K-12 rushes into a large room where the Angel of Death is. The room has lots of dead guards with their limbs lost.

 

Angel of Death: I have found you K-12! Did you begin to feel emotional yet?

 

K-12: That does not matter.

 

K-12 runs towards the Angel of Death but K-12 gets struck down by the bladed staff. He gets a scar on his chest. The blood sprays onto the Angel of Death.

 

Angel of Death: It is useless young one. I can read every move you do next. I am more superior and older than you are.

 

K-12 still continues to fight the Angel of Death. The Angel of Death is untouched by K-12 as the fight goes on. K-12 still gets tossed around and impaled by the Angel of Death.

 

Angel of Death: Did you abandon her K-12, did you?

 

K-12: Who are you refering to?.....Who are you refering to?

 

Angel of Death: Look into your soul, mind, and heart. Who is the one you care for the most besides yourself?

 

K-12 stops struggling against the Angel of Death. He begins to see Jennifer in his mind. He breaks free from the staff and rushes towards Jennifer.

 

Angel of Death: Yes....save her. Don't let her die K-12.

 

A group of guards throw cubes onto the Angel of Death. They explode a ton of electric grenades which shock and stun the Angel of Death. In the meanwhile Cain and Jennifer are in a the room where Tomislav died.

 

Cain: Look at this green bottle Jennifer! Read it!

 

Jennifer: (reading the bottle) Error on developing Formula Zero. Do not use.

 

Cain: That's right, and that idiot Tomislav used that error right before he died. Now the fact that you kissed K-12 is the worst thing you did to him

 

Jennifer: (screaming) Enough Enough...he is a human being just like us. He may have developed faster than us, or he may have superior strength than us, but he is innocent.

 

Cain: No.... we don't want innocence. That is what chains us from survival of the fittest Jennifer. In fact you were not the survival of the fittest when I met you. You were that crying lonely little beggar in the streets as a child, now I brought you into this place and you still show no appreciation for what I have done for you!

 

Jennifer: Stop it...Innocence is what the world has lost.

 

Cain: Why do you care for such a product that will be defective? We may have given him Formula Zero which obliterates his emotions and will give him the urge to kill, but that green bottle is what reverses that stuff. 

 

K-12 continues to rush towards Jennifer. The guards are watching him.

 

Guard: Hey, go back and take out that Angel....

 

K-12 grabs the guard's head and abrades it onto the wall as he runs. The face turns into a bloody skull. He beats down more guards as he tries to find Jennifer. He eventually finds the room and sees Jennifer.

 

K-12: Let her go Cain.

 

Cain: Oh...I feel so disrepected K-12. Yes that is my name but you must call me (he pulls out a stun gun) Master!

 

K-12 gets shocked by the stun gun

 

To be continued



© 2012 Xerclipse


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Good chapter, you might want to put in more development into Jennifer and K 12's relationship though. (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


"In the meanwhile Cain grabs Jennifer in her arm." Owww... in her arm... Unless you just meant that he grabs her arm, not in it. Also, it's "in the meantime" or just "meanwhile," not "in the meanwhile".
"I am more older and superior than you are." The word "more" should be in front of "superior", not "older".
What's an electron bomb? Is that even possible? I googled it but I didn't find anything... Nuclear bombs mess with atoms if that's what you meant, but then the whole area they are in would be decimated and they would be dead or dying from radiation poisoning.
But hey, I like where the story is going. Go K-12!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Are you going to elaborate on Jen and Cain's back story later? I hope so because I think that would be interesting. Each chapter leaves you with a bigger and bigger cliffhanger.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Hey people of Writer's cafe, what's up? You may call me Xerclipse and its about a year since I had this. I am 18 years old and I am at Mass Art right now! I write books with a lot of action and vio.. more..

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