My Naked Thoughts

Give me a dream that will make me

forget about the present.

Lead me to such light where

even the tiniest penumbra

does not wander.

Love has again thwarted my plans

for tomorrow's loneliness.

My time, staring in the mirror,

does not know which way to get into

my naked thoughts.

Don't avoid my dreams, they are part

of my fear. And when you decide

to go to sleep, bend over my cradle

and promise me a world I'll never know.

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
First to read your thought provoking poem.
I really enjoyed every word.
And hidden behind the deeper meaning.
Really wonderful...
Thank you for sharing this!!
Lisa, now evening in Spain

[Katarzyna Anna Koziorowska]

Thank you very much for so many kind words! I am very pleased that you liked my poems. Greetings!

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome.. Hope you find the time to read mine as well.
Lisa, now in Spain