My Childhood Dreams

Don't fool my childhood dreams.

Don't lie to me

that love is only meant for

singles.

You are reborn from the pain here,

your light dies in my hands.

Come on, let's wake up

from this supposed trip.

Let time bless the light

of your fresh lips,

let the vengeful morning revive

in us what is left of trust.

Melancholy knocked on your door,

the silence took its final breath away

from your lungs.

A beautiful lie resurrected us,

pain bloomed under your eyelids.

I will not let you steal the last

of my heart from me.

I refuse to let the light in your lips

go out.

Will stolen thoughts ever become

a harvest for the lost?

Will faith in the unknown create

a void in us?

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

Melancholy knocked on your door,
the silence took its final breath away
from your lungs.
A beautiful lie resurrected us,
pain bloomed under your eyelids.

I REALLY LOVE this part, this is amazing writing right here

[M. J. Smith]

Don't fool my childhood dreams... All too soon, those truths believed in innocence fade. Betrayed by life and love, we become disillusioned. This is my takeaway. Sad words, my friend.

[Lisasview]

Oh goodness, another of yours I just love..
This is the type of poetry that needs to be read and reread several times..at least that is what I have done..To truly capture what lies beneath the words..
I just fell in love with this poem..
Lisa

[Kim S.]

Will stolen thoughts ever become
a harvest for the lost?
Will faith in the unknown create
a void in us?

love this part, this is wonderful,
very well written write, nicely done and expressed