My Childhood Memories

My thoughts are bleeding obediently.

I have a passion that cannot be lost.

I am pained by the fear

that one day I will forget your breath,

as green as young hope.

Do not pretend that your body

is not obeying you.

The light in the emeralds of your eyes

intimidates my prayer.

Since the world stopped playing

with its own silence,

I was reborn in your soothing arms.

I am dying poisoned by your past.

My eternity is ending,

my childhood memories are ending.

Stop feeding me with acid tears,

let's wait for them to mature.

Do not worry about providence,

go away obediently,

find the source of empty unbelief.

Your body hurts you politely,

your soul deprives me

of the sight of life, of paradise,

of God.

Go away by closing the door

to heaven. Pick up the boulder

of clouds that bloomed in your dreams.

Your innocence awoke in

an underestimated era.

Colorless is the epitaph

that adorns your conscience.

I wish I could die on your breath,

but God had a different plan.

I look after the wound

that I had left after I woke up yesterday.

It is not worth singing

when the world is deaf.

It is not worth believing, because

no one knows the name of God.

Reviews

[Writergurl]

Your innocence awoke in
an underestimated era.
Colorless is the epitaph
that adorns your conscience.
I wish I could die on your breath,
but God had a different plan.

I really like this stanza, I can feel this write, it is so emotional.

[Betty Hermelee]

Fear of memories fading, a wish to hang on, yet it is impossible; a tribute to someone dear, who has vanished, wishing to die on that breath. Your writing is excellent, honest, sad but real.
Best, Betty

[M. J. Smith]

Childhood haunts in so many ways. I can't begin to imagine yours. Shadows too deep where even His light is a mere pinpoint... So sad, my friend.

[Lisasview]

Oh my goodness..your poem is quite powerful and some way upsetting..which is a good thing..because good poetry really needs one to feel..something.
Lisa

[Katarzyna Anna Koziorowska]

Thank you very much! It's very nice that you like my work. Greetings!