Lovable remembrance….

My sweet love life

                             Lovable remembrance….

The day I saw you first                              

gave me a good warm .. aura..                                    

I was eagering to talk,smile and

have an enormous time with you….

But God made me to wait..

At that time,The look that you show                      

make me melt like a snow that

sees the sunshine .. which closes

it’s face in shyness ..:-))

 

Your eyes, oh god, I believe

that was created for me.

Each and every day makes me

feel Amen took me to heaven..

where He showed me a world..

of only you and me.. There, angels dancing .. singing ..

laughing .. and wishing us..

 

After waiting a long like a bee that waits

for a flower, God gave a golden opportunity..

Finally, you called to tell that your path towards me started !!!

Our gorgeous way of talking through eyes..

Your waving hands and smile portrayed many many

words.. which only came into the world and traversed

wonderfull paths to reach it’s destiny..

My eyes..:-))

 

You know in class I used to dream of

topics to talk with you in the evening..

But more surprising is that you too do the same and

ask me the same questions and topics that I

thought.. What a living we are.. JJ

Are we made for each other ! ?? J WHO KNOWSs..

The small small astonishment that you give

I would say,it’s the essence that made me

to create a world of OUR’S ....

 

One fine evening,when you told me I LOVE YOU,

I was flying in the sky .. universe ..

even top than that.. 

Though I knew this day would come,

I never regretted or avoided you..

Because , I don’t want anyone to misplace

your footprints in my life..

How can I make you hang on when I had such

a greater and sweeter love for you.as you had. !! !!

 

From then, you holded me in your

hands.. kept me warm all the time.

Took care of me in the way that I expected

and dreamt of my hubby .. Each time when we get

coincidence, I feel like you are for me.. only for me.. !!!!

You always stood in front of me

and tackled my problem as if it were yours.

 

You Loved the way I am !!

The way you care me make my love

to incline .. rise .. slope .. hill ..

The dreams that we shared daily..

Our manner of seeing each other

when we come opposite in the corridor..

Everything that we did was good..

is better in memory.. will be the best

in heart $$

 

I get a smile when I think of you.

I get a good feel when I close my eyes

and remind you of..I laugh like a

small baby with no reason when I think you of..

when my friendz use your name to see that small

lovable smile in my cheeks.. when dudes uses

to make my face whitish with shyness..

You know everything is like a fairy

world where my only job is to think of

you love you care you..

I cannot live a life without you.

How can I live when you are my heart ..mind ..

feel .. life and everything.. ??

 

I am eagering to sit near you, see your eyes closer,

hold your hands, walk in the road along with you,

smile with you, lay on your shoulder..

 

The way we look each other without knowing to

anyone.. The tactic that we use

to see each other by lying on the bench !!

The secret chocolates that I found in my book

kept by my life..

The small smile you got when you saw my pen

in your book..:-))

The face that is already looking me in prayer

when I raise my head to see.. And by looking at that

lovely face I put my head down in shyness.. with a cute smile..

By seeing that you too get a tiny laugh and turn your face..

What a golden days da those were..:-)

When I saw your love words for me in my diary

I was lifeless darl .. You know , I was, actually,

stunned by seeing your love towards me..

Oh god ,please give me those golden days back..

I want those days .. To be with my love ..my life ..

.. Feel I am the luckiest in this world da . .

I know all this will happen some day or the other..

I pray GOD will surely bless me with a greatest gift , itz none

other  than YOUUUU my sweetheart !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Your feedback is my priority..

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you Kousika for this sweet poem.

I did email you to say sorry this could not be considered for an award as you had to write a poem TOGETHER with another poet. (Collaboration poem as per the rules of the contest)

Kind regards,

Helena

[Kousika]

Oh .. Ya Ok i will put my another writing..

[Shubham Joshi]

I love reading and writing romantic poems and this is a very good poem. It's a good old way to remember and embrace the lovely memories intact again and again. Yet there is just a small grammatical error, "dudes uses", it could be "dudes use".

[Kousika]

thanks dear... wil remember that....

[nazia]

This is such a lovely remembrance. He is one lucky person I would say. Great work Kousika :)

[Kousika]

Thanks dear.. pray all gets such an awesome guy.. :)) :))

[Aatharva Banaitkar]

Awesome piece of work

[Kousika]

Thanks.. :-)