Forever

Forever seems like a long time

A lot can happen

ups and downs

love gained and love lost

After the years of heartbreak

I've finally gotten it right

and I've come to realize

that when it comes to you and me

forever is just not long enough

Reviews

[Cari Zahn]

this is cool, i like the shift

[John Ryan]

this is very good

i like the use of time within this piece of writing
i love the last two lines!

[sonnie ibadah]

wow, very romantic. kinda like there are unspoken promises, nice work!