Our little white flower

Our little white flower

A Poem by Dakota
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Petals represent pieces of life and spirit. The petals in a person represent the persons spirit and want of life. The yellow heart represents the person itself. The rain resprensents the hard times

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White little petals,
surround its yellow heart

Each little petal,
such life in each part

Not each day sunny,
sometimes it rains

Petal by petal falls,
all from the pain

Our little white flower,
less, but still bears

Storms rolling in,
our petals fly through the air

With no petals left,
our yellow heart is solely

All alone,
our little yellow heart fades slowly

Pieces of spirit,
pieces of life

Gone from the rough,
gone from the lies

Our little white flower,
seemed to have had it with nature

It had defeat itself
from something greater

Our little white petals
on our little white flower

Could've saved they're selves,
could've held they're power

Just a little longer,
the sun came back out

But our little white flower, we are without

© 2015 Dakota


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Dakota
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Ah but if it a perennial life will come again, though the winter is harsh the spring, surely will bring some new petals and then the yellow flower will glow with happiness again. A sweet analogy of an individual's life well done

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 1, 2015
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Tags: Little, white, flower, suicide, petals, life, death, pain

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