Something i told a friend today

Motivation

Its always to start, when you do this and when you do that, until the time comes and we say something else is missing. Defending everything you do and everything you say instead of actually realizing that it can only start with you. It has too come out of the nothingness. It can not start with the reliance on the illusion that change will make you better. It can only ever start when you can learn to tell yourself that the situations in your life don't create your sense of happiness,only you can create that. 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

An excellent message knowing the truth of human situations. Wonderful you shared and wrote marvelously...:)..................

[Korin]

Thanks again Sami :) Look forward to reading more of your work.

[Sami Khalil]

Any time. Please send some read requests when you post...:)................

[Korin]

I will try. I'm just learning how to use this. I'm a newbie. :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)...............

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"It can only ever start when you can learn to tell yourself that the situations in your life don't create your sense of happiness,only you can create that. "
Thank you for sharing the excellent thoughts and poetry.
Coyote

[roarke]

Nice concepts. Remove or describe what each "it" is and the writing/meaning will be stronger... it is too ambiguous.

[Korin]

Thanks for the advice. I have trouble sometimes differentiating what goes on in my head and what i actually write. I assume people will just understand right away and this isn't the case.

[Stephen]

This is very true. It's so easy to seek for happiness externally but you will never find happiness there, only the want for more. Happiness only comes from within as you said. Very good write. Thanks for sharing

[Korin]

Thanks for the encouragement i'm really new to this.

[Relic]

~This diction in this is a bit vague, especially the beginning which is the most important part of a poem or short story. You mention a couple of times--it or it's...perhaps you could be more specific.

[Korin]

I get this a lot. I appreciate your comment. I will be sure the remember that for my next post.

[Relic]

No problem. :)