Pray

A Poem by 송지석 / Ji-Suk

All the lies that whispered in a different reality

The truth disappears and gets trapped in darkness

My shouts get smaller in this powerless reality

They’re just meaningless things in this world of lies

See you now? See me now?

I’m broken in my faith

Oh, please god hear me?

I can’t do anything

Oh, please god tell me!

In this frozen world

Oh, please god hear me?

But the day I shout out

So I won’t lose my way

I’ll pray I’ll pray I’ll pray

I’ll pray for you

This path repeats again in this fight that can’t be won

Even when I go against it, only my scars grow

When I open my eyes, the results are already in

I’m getting used to it but it’s all meaningless

See you now? See me now?

I’m broken in my faith

Oh, please god hear me?

I can’t do anything

Oh, please god tell me!

In this frozen world

Oh, please god hear me?

But the day I shout out

So I won’t lose my way

Oh, please god help me

Look at me, I’m here alone

Oh, please god help me

Only with cold tears

Oh, please god hear me?

I can’t do anything

Oh, please god tell me!

In this frozen world

Oh, please god hear me?

But the day I shout out

So I won’t lose my way

I’ll pray I’ll pray I’ll pray

My shouts get smaller in this powerless reality

They’re just meaningless things in this world of lies

I’ll pray for you

I’ll pray I’ll pray I’ll pray

When I open my eyes, the results are already in

I’m getting used to it but it’s all meaningless

I’ll pray

© 2018 송지석 / Ji-Suk

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Riddhi

Actually what I think is different , it may sound somewhat irritating to you but still I want to share it..After reading this the first thing that came up in my mind is actually I am among those people who actually doubt the existence of god , I know that it must sound annoying but I always try to find god in my work and in the things that I do..And instead of praying god , I try to help out myself because somewhere I heard that god only help those who help themselves...But you know you should keep believe in yourself and you should keep that fighter spirit within you alive to face all the adverse conditions and keep faith in you that you can do...You might be having bad times now but you will be having good times soon..You know time is never constant its always changing and actually happiness and sadness are like two parts of wheel and the name of wheel is Time...Time is always moving that is the wheel is always moving with its both parts sadness and happiness..If today you are having adverse conditions that tomorrow will be good..Time can't always be the same..Just believe in your hard work and yourself..And you know I have always heard that whatever happens with you , it happens for your own good..I used to never believe in it and I used to find this non sense but because of instances in my life I do believe it now..I know today what I am saying may sound just philosophy and non sense and you may be thinking that its too see for me to say these but one day you will feel that what I said was correct..Anyway , even in your adverse conditions , I will be glad to always help you my friend..Don't lose your precious smile because it has infinite treasures within it and its the most precious thing...Don't lose hope , keep telling yourself that you have to survive it all for yourself , for your tiny tots , for your loving fiancee..I know that one day you will be at the top of the world and everything will turn out good..And see who is telling this to you who herself is lost in her life..Anyway , I am always there you can share anything with me..I hope that everything will get fine and if actually god exists then I will pray for you...
Take care....

Posted 6 Years Ago

Actually what I think is different , it may sound somewhat irritating to you but still I want to share it..After reading this the first thing that came up in my mind is actually I am among those people who actually doubt the existence of god , I know that it must sound annoying but I always try to find god in my work and in the things that I do..And instead of praying god , I try to help out myself because somewhere I heard that god only help those who help themselves...But you know you should keep believe in yourself and you should keep that fighter spirit within you alive to face all the adverse conditions and keep faith in you that you can do...You might be having bad times now but you will be having good times soon..You know time is never constant its always changing and actually happiness and sadness are like two parts of wheel and the name of wheel is Time...Time is always moving that is the wheel is always moving with its both parts sadness and happiness..If today you are having adverse conditions that tomorrow will be good..Time can't always be the same..Just believe in your hard work  and yourself..And you know I have always heard that whatever happens with you , it happens for your own good..I used to never believe in it and I used to find this non sense but because of instances in my life I do believe it now..I know today what I am saying may sound just philosophy and non sense and you may be thinking that its too see for me to say these but one day you will feel that what I said was correct..Anyway , even in your adverse conditions , I will be glad to always help you my friend..Don't lose your precious smile because it has infinite treasures within it and its the most precious thing...Don't lose hope , keep telling yourself that you have to survive it all for yourself , for your tiny tots , for your loving fiancee..I know that one day you will be at the top of the world and everything will turn out good..And see who is telling this to you who herself is lost in her life..Anyway , I am always there you can share anything with me..I hope that everything will get fine and if actually god exists then I will pray  for you...
Take care....

Rating /100

6 Years Ago

You have a great way with words and explaining! Life is hard and we must press on no matter what!

6 Years Ago

Hmm..Actually we have to live this life no matter how many hurdles come our way..

Please do keep praying friend...I feel and know Almighty does listen...give a look at the lovely smiles and giggles of your babies and also at the little happy things around you....if you ever feel like no god is listening to you don't lose hope rather believe in reasons...without any reason you mustn't have been on this earth...and for your sufferings there's also a/some reason(s)....that too good ones!!
Almighty's grace be upon you and your family!☺