Life's Possibilities

Sunshine! Let's go colleagues!
The sky is the limit!

Big cheers to the sunrise!
It's the opening of the new era

The sun is looking out for us
Despite any kind of ending we may end up with
Let's march on with a bright smile on your face

Internet has everything
Life difficulty VERY EASY
But I don't see any good way to survive this tough life
The role I chose was a Corporate Fighter
Initial Equipment NONE
SMILE IS YOUR STRONGEST WEAPON
Working every day for the loving family
Real life is very harsh}

Yes Or No

The life is full of making decisions

Can't go back to the saving points
Make sure to be Careful
&
Dynamic

Big cheers to the sunrise!
Oops, it's a little too early to drink!
A little reflection towards the sunset

Today's failures will be tomorrow's success

Gather a party at the bar,

and quietly have a blasting battle
Leveled up with the earned EXP
The blank map's been filled when you realize it

"Wanna go on a journey with a hero?"
"No"
"Wanna own half of the world?"
"No."
I've got my sweet home to return

and that's where my happiness belongs to

"I want something to tell myself

who turns out to be a dancer!"
"Whaaat?!"
"Don't look back!!
No matter what happens, you've got a squad to support you!!"

Come on!
Get the reckless projects done

Scoring "A" towards the sunset
A great opponent is me, myself

Despite any future descisions I make
I never want a bit of regret
Tomorrow's gonna be a better day

(A friend and I wrote this together!)

© 2018 송지석 / Ji-Suk

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Riddhi

I loved this poem...This was really nice especially the line A great opponent is me myself..You know your strong point is you write from your heart ..You pour all what you feel in your writing and that makes it really nice..And I must say that you are improving greatly as a writer..With your every writing , I see a new Ji Suk...
Keep on writing..

Posted 6 Years Ago

Just Kim

Internet has everything
Life difficulty VERY EASY
But I don't see any good way to survive this tough life
The role I chose was a Corporate Fighter

It's the living part that is hard, life goes on as well as with us in it as well as us not in it,
we choose to live it the best way we know how. We live life, it doesn't really live in us.
I like this write, it is very intriguing...

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much! I am glad you liked it! I am glad you enjoyed those lines.

Lavi

Admittedly I was caught off guard by the smiles intro but found myself enjoying the read quite a bit. It reminds me of slight nostalgia too. My favorite lines were:
"It's the opening of the new era
The sun is looking out for us
Despite any kind of ending we may end up with" - which for me, the message was that things are changing, but tomorrow is looking out for us as a new start, in the light of day, no matter if we live today and die tomorrow. Gives a sense of free-will because in your next lines...
"I've got my sweet home to return
and that's where my happiness belongs to"
And some individual lines I loved were:
"A great opponent is me, myself"
and
"Today's failures will be tomorrow's success"

This writing has given me both a glimpse into your life and a perspective of your mind, something I love to learn about (for no one person's thoughts parallel another's) and this was just unexpectedly incredible. Thanks to both you and your friend for sharing this.

Take care of yourselves... - L