Opening The Door Of Longing

I still hear your voice.

I still feel your touch.
Today, I live in your traces again.

I still see you. 

I still feel your warmth.

Today, I live in your time again.

Even in the strangers passing by on the street

Even in the fallen leaves dancing alone in the breeze. 

Even in the evening wind that grazes my cheek. 

You're everywhere I hear and feel.

How are you, how are you?
How are you now?

I feel you.
Right now when I'm calling for you like this, I see you

Tomorrow, I will see you again.

Tomorrow, I will hear you again.

Everything will be the same as today.

On the chair that's left on the street

Inside the glass of water I pick up to drink 

In the mirror I face to see myself 

In the music gently in my ears, you're all there

What now? What should I do now?

Your memories come to me

Opening the door of longing 

And make me in tears

And my heart is torn apart

Reviews

[flaco]

a beautiful tribute - your pain , sorrow , longing and love come thru very clearly.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks very much. I wrote it as a tribute to my sister who was murdered

[Riddhi]

I loved this..You expressed your feelings so beautifully in this poem..It was a beautiful tribute...I liked the second para especially..You wrote this for the part of you that has passed as child..Am I right??? But you know always there is a child living in us...Even when we will grow old it will still remain alive...If I make it a song for a man who remembers his lover then also it will sound perfect you know..It can actually be converted into a song!!! You wrote it so beautifully...
Keep on writing..

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks very much. I wrote it as a tribute to my sister who was murdered.

[Riddhi]

Oh...I misinterpreted it I am sorry...Your sister was murdered..That is really sad...I pray that her soul rests in peace and the culprits get punishment...

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you. I hope so too.

[Onlyme]

Beautiful tribute to a part of you that has passed your child. Never to be seperated never to be gone. But always with you close, in heart,mind and soul, so sorry for your loss.