Smile

Quietly more honestly

I'll open my folded heart

Calmly and composedly

I'll sweetly listen to myself

as if I pat me

I want to hug myself preciously

That's who I am 

I might be locked in 

a weird loneliness

I should have been left

myself as who I am

I want to lean on you 

and fall asleep again

In a drunk night, I want to

follow the dreamy sweetness 
By walking on a pleasant breeze

I want to kiss you as if 

it's my first time

If I knew this I should

have looked at you more

Silently and sentimentally 
I'm listening to my memories 

accumulating every day

Ordinarily and specially
Even I don't know myself
how can I live?
Always in the small room 

with gentle smiles

My day brightened by love

The soft air surrounding us

On a night sky

the stars and trees

A cozy blanket and your voice

Your whispering tickling my ears

You're in my arms

making me comfortable

As I think about you
I'm making a smile

Reviews

[kitty]

So delicate and sweet these words you put on page. Soft words that enfold you in a gentle embrace. Thank you for sharing.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much.

[kitty]

You are welcome.

[April Blue]

A lovely poem, I really enjoyed the feast of words you use and great description..

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much!

[Riddhi]

I liked this poem..The one character as a writer that i feel that i should appreciate is that your every poem , not in sense of topics rather structures are actually always different from others that you have previously wrote and i really appreciate that..Like when it comes to your poem LOVE , it had a lot of metaphors in it which was not in PRICE OF BEING YOUNG , it was different and this is another piece..The thing that i liked about this poem is that every para has got its own freshness , something different from the previous one but even though the paras were different , i feel that as a reader i can connect it with the previous one..That is actually an improvement over PRICE OF BEING YOUNG...But should i say you one thing , next time please use commas and fullstops and all other symbols in your poem..I am not saying that it has got something to do with grammar rather as you read poem , as a reader if there is already a fullstop or a comma present then instead of diverting a reader's attention to where he or she will be taking pause , where he will be thinking that these set of ideas have ended , he can focus more on the entire concept behind this poem..I hope that you get what i mean to say..And yes the second point that i found missing was a rhyming scheme..You know there are very great writers who write free verse poems - those that don't have rhyming scheme , but in this poem i felt that if there would have been a rhyming scheme then it would have made it a more good poem..It varies from poem to poem whether to keep it as a free verse or to add rhyming scheme to it , and here my instinct says that these poem should have rhyming scheme..and you know the third thing was that as i said earlier even though a poem is made of different paras but the reader should feel that each para is linked with the earlier as well as the next and i felt that missing between second and third para...
Overall , I must say that you are improving by leaps and bounds and that's good ..Try that your every poem will be better than the previous one and yes overall , i liked your poem as what you said actually appealed to me..When you were remembering all of your memories with your love , it actually left a smile even on my face...
Eager to read your next writing..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..
Riddhi

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks for your nice review! I like to mix up my writing and do different stuff with it.

[Riddhi]

Welcome and that's nice what you do...

[¿]

Smile goes out of control sometimes!😀
Now here reading it makes me think boys can also blush without the compact blush girls use.....
Smile - the natural remedy for healing heart or for making it feel better more than we carve...
Smile Ji Suk😊

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much!