Love

If you're the firework above the sea

I'm the bubble of the waves

There will be a moment when your light brightens up my life

If you're the faraway galaxy

that brings tears to eyes with your glory

I'm that pair of eyes that never stops chasing your light

Whenever I am lonely, I'll look up at the starry sky

I could follow behind you back

Like a shadow chasing the light

I could wait at this crossing

No matter if you are passing by

Whenever I look up for you

Even my tears feel free

Bright as the sun, some love may be

Disappearing as it shines 

If you're the firefly of the summer night

while the children sing for you

I would wish to become the hand that's drawing you

Look at me, such insignificant me 

I could dream because of you

Heavy as rain, some love may be 

Rainbow remains as our belief

Reviews

[Riddhi]

Ah..Your girlfriend is really beautiful..I always felt that korean girls are too beautiful and she is epitome for it..I really liked your poem because as i read i felt that you poured your soul out in this poem and the main thing is you wrote all your feelings..Did you showed this poem to her????She must have be really happy at it...I liked the way you expressed your feelings in your poem ...You know there are many writers though they write poems but only some of them are able to you know do it properly..And you were able to do it..Well done..I really loved the way you used metaphors...Actually i am always writing what improvement a person should do in his writing and today i have read this poem so many times but i am unable to actually tell it..And yes this poem seemed to me like it can be converted into a song ...Something like descendant of the sun's You are my everything song...
Keep on writing and i really eager to read your next work..
Riddhi

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much, I did give her the poem I had handwritten actually. She actually cried when she read it so I guess she liked it

[Riddhi]

Aw...So cute..I read from others review's replies that you are going to become dad and you are going to be marrying soon..Hearty congratulations to both of you..I hope that you both and your children live a healthy and prosperous life together..

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you! I am excited to have the twins

[AllauraRose]

This is really good! I can tell you care for her! It's very well written and all seems to come together at the end which is nice. I like all the metaphors, and how you are willing to follow her everywhere even if it's just as friends. Great job!

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much! She's twelve months pregnant with our future twins! And we're getting married next year.

[AllauraRose]

Congratulations! I have quadruplet sisters and they are a handful! I wish you the best of luck with the babies!

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you!

[¿]

Yeah, she's the brightest fireworks for you!
You know you've got guts to present your own experiences and share it among us....And we'll love to read further...
For a person you become the "Anything"......and may you make the sweetest life with her in your "Everything"
And again.....She's beautiful🌹
Thanks for sharing Ji Suk😊

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you! She's twelve months pregnant with our future twins! And we're getting married next year

[¿]

Good luck would be Dad!😊

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you! I am excited!