Alone

When my room is lit by the sunlight,

Will someone hug the lonely me?
The ramen that I cooked so badly

Who will eat it with me now? 

You were the type who hugged me

And said I wasn't a quiet and cold person, big brother 

When my hands were so cold that you didn't let go all night 

I miss it, I feel so frustrated today 

You'll sometimes smile while thinking of me 

I will bury myself in my bed and hide again 

A night without you is too lonely for me

I'm sick of putting on a strong front every day 

because I liked writing poems I made for you, big brother 

The house feels lonely without you

The traces cannot be erased, it can't be done

Tonight I want to go to you even in my dreams

The many girls that like me don't fill the hole in my heart

No matter how they shine, we cannot communicate 

I'm not even interested, whether we love or not

The thing that I cannot escape,

Falling in love and losing my soul 

Becoming a broken corpse 

I'd rather walk a lonely path

Erase myself more

So that no-one will remember me

"I'm sorry, I can't go on"

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I wanted to disappear often. I try. I learn you cannot. I liked the honest thoughts and I felt the struggle in your words. Thank you for sharing the powerful words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Onlyme]

I feel your pain, your suffering your woes. I feel for you. I relate. and your never ever alone. Reach out. hugs.

[Laurierose]

Hope. Pardon the optimism, but hope is the constant that gives us the will to carry on. If we never hoped for better days, then we wouldn't have much to look forward to daily. When it comes to loneliness, it is possible to be alone and not lonely. However, in the event that we are, then there are resources and outlets that should be sought after; like writing poetry. Have faith in the good days. Great read.

[Anvaya]

You are never alone. 'You' are always by your side.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh dear- don’t say you can’t go on- there’s always hope- missing someone longing for the tenderness, care, understanding- leaves a void but this too shall pass- inside you can find the strength to go in there’s always hope- never give up or give in your miracle is just around the corner- sending comfort your way- beautiful words - true expression of your heart- be strong🌹

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you for your kind words.

[sette]

life goes on despite the pain

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much!

[¿]

Loneliness is a most unwanted suffering to us I guess....sometimes if sn annoying is staying beside you with notorious deeds...if that person leaves we'll feel that empty place for sure....but here is a pure bond being missed....then how painful the loneliness be!!
Too well penned Ji Suk😊

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you calling it well penned.

[¿]

You made it Ji Suk!😊