Pathetic

When you’re on a date with another guy

I hope you get food poisoning

When you’re in the bathroom

I hope there’s no toilet paper

I hope you have low battery on your phone

And you lose your charger

I hope you drop your phone

And the screen shatters

I hope when you’re on your period

It hurts even more

But girl to be honest

I don’t resent you

I’m the pathetic one for losing you

So I resent myself more

Oh girl, I still regret every single day

That I lost you

The truth is, girl, like a fool

I’m just waiting for you to come back

Girl to be honest

After you left me

I didn’t know what to do with myself

I still can’t snap out of it

Oh girl, living a life without you

Has no meaning at all

The truth is, girl girl, I’m not confident

If it’s not you, I can’t ever love again

Without you, I’m miserable

Oh girl the reason for that is

You completed me

Please come back to me

The truth is, I only doubted you and treated you badly

Because I was guilty myself

Im so sorry, so sorry, so sorry

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the honest tone to the story in the poem. I liked you accepted part of the blame. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks! it was to my first girlfriend I had dated lol

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem and you are welcome.

[Anvaya]

Beautiful. The emotions are conveyed well.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much!

[Laurierose]

I hope I'm not speaking in cliché too much here, but there is a thin line between love and hate. Just as much as we can love one another is a coin toss. On the reverse side there's hate. It's the passion that's poisoned and it can work in our favor of a great love or scorn. Great read.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks, I am glad you thought it was a great read!

[¿]

Yearning for the lost one here...specially who was lost because of yours deeds.....
But feeling guilty by own isn't that drama.....when the heart really wants to have her back!!
Nice read😊

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you!

[sette]

time to move on that is the way to love