Break Up

The end of love is a goodbye

At the same time, tears trickle down 

It wouldn’t feel right if it didn’t rain but it’s raining

Another typical love tradition has materialized, let’s go

Yeah, love is incomplete

The story of love equation

There’s always rain in the breakup scenes

Am I living in some tropical rainforest?

The long night’s loneliness, autumn, and memories

Why do these always stick around, what kind of love is this?

While you draw out the person who left

Your tears keep falling but you wish for that person’s happiness

Where will you find a nice person like that these days?

Even a long time ago, they probably only just said that

I guess this is it

I force a smile and awkwardly hug you

I try to be cool as I go home

It feels like the same but it’s different

This inexpressible, ambiguous, sad exponent calculation

Not even the moon will know this feeling of goodbye

You might feel better afterward so don’t cry

Have you ever broken up with someone on a sunny

and dazzling day? �" It’s even worse than rainy days

Because you can’t hide even your smallest expressions

This feeling can’t be described with those typical

breakup songs �" This feeling of losing you

But why do tears come when I hear them?

Will my footsteps going back after leaving you feel so heavy?

Will I go back comfortably, turn on the TV and laugh?

Can’t I think about you and just fall asleep?

Yea, love can’t just be created right away

Goodbye, goodbye

I’m going

Have you ever broken up with someone on a sunny

and dazzling day? �" It’s even worse than rainy days

Because you can’t hide even your smallest expressions

This feeling can’t be described with those typical

breakup songs �" This feeling of losing you

But why do tears come when I hear them?

Don’t shed those typical tears anymore

The end doesn’t always have to be sad

My emotions are different from others

Look at me, standing before this goodbye

I’m going

Have you ever broken up with someone on a sunny

and dazzling day? �" It’s even worse than rainy days

Because you can’t hide even your smallest expressions

This feeling can’t be described with those typical

breakup songs �" This feeling of losing you

But why do tears come when I hear them?

This feeling can’t be described with those typical

breakup songs �" This feeling of losing you

But why do tears come when I hear them?

Reviews

[lightsong]

reading this left me with more than one feeling... and I was in a middle of a drama's scene form Your own country, a Korean drama, yes, many times there is rain, maybe to make it more emotional? though this is about goodbye, but I felt warmth, soft warrmth, like a teardrop coming down under a pale sun, not like a pain that cuts deep, but more like a wound that is healing, with a nice breeze coming over it... maybe Your poem would be perfect as a song for some drama, I sense it so much like that... Your expressions are very well written, reaching gently with deep sadness to our hearts.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it c:

[Traci]

A sad yet beautiful well written poem about love, and loss. The imagery, and pure emotion was so well written that I could feel something, so much more than just words on a page. I love the way you tied rain into this, there truly is something about rainy days that makes the pain even more severe. Great job!

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much for your beautiful review. I am glad you enjoyed it.