Fantasy

I made a wish under the bloodshot sky

I believe that this would all be a dream when I open my eyes

But it didn’t come true

Exhausted, I’ve lost my way

Please take me anywhere

I’ll do anything

Someone help

I know that it’s over

Someone help

The end of you was me

My fantasy will swallow everything

It’ll change everything

It’s just a fantasy

Pain comes up like thorns

An empty sign like a night that lost the moon

My tragedy, if there’s only one way that opens

Please save me, fantasy

Get back up off that dream 

The ectasy that filled me pains me

It rides me and thickly flows

My burnt and black heaven

My anger that grew from that tragic place

It chokes me, makes me lost all day

Someone help

I know that it’s too late

Someone help

Even if it’s late

My fantasy in my embrace will stop everything

I want to live in that place

It’s just a fantasy

Pain comes up like thorns

An empty sign like a night that lost the moon

My tragedy, if there’s only one way that opens

Please save me, fantasy

Fantasy you spill onto me

You’re my tragedy, my remaining everything

In my stolen heart

In my crooked fate

I’m handing over to fantasy fantasy

In just one moment, like smoke

I’m drinking you who’s spreading throughout my body

Pain pain

I can be in more pain

Even if I get torn apart and cut by knives

I only need to have you

Your existence is heaven and hell

The standard to divide that line

I promised to be your angel

You need to have me

It’s just a fantasy

Pain rises from here and there

With broken lights, the sign fills up

My tragedy, I’ll give you my everything

So give yourself back to me, fantasy

So I can’t even erase you

It’s all mine, it’s my fantasy

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told the truth. Somethings can't be erased. I liked the honest tone and realistic thoughts in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[sette]

an amazing written work expresses what you want it to be

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much!

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

Wow... Just.. wow... This is so amazingly well written, I don't even know how to put words together like that XD The meaning of the poem and just the way you get it across... It's astonishing

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much! It was for one of my language classes where I had to write about pain! I had to retranslate it which was hard a bit

[Locke Redwyne (night sys)]

Well, you did a very good job of it!