Fool

The street we use to walk on numerously

I am walking down the street.
With other women, not you 

As you can see, I am doing well 
I'm fine

Please don't bother me

You think I am still dwelling in the past, mother?
I'm sorry that you miss someone you can manipulate

That fool is no longer here 

Did you miss me? 
The one that died back then?

It is the end now

I still remember seeing you walk behind those iron bars

I pray that you'd come back

That fool who waited for you 

That fool is no longer here 

Everything has changed, this street has changed too

Why didn't you come back? 

By turning the clock?

What more do you want from me?

You will we be abandoned

You're my toy, I am the predator and you're the prey now

Once I get sick of you, it's over

You think I am still dwelling in the past, mother?

I'm sorry that you miss someone you can manipulate

That fool is no longer here 

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Sad that people try and manipulate especially parents- children or adult we have right to own choices and actions as long as they are done in truth and integrity- then again we all have our own paths to walk and will learn by ourselves- but when we feel that we are taken for a fool then it’s the one making you feel this way who has a lesson to learn- well written- 🌹

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you for your input!

[Coyote Poetry]

Realistic places and story and places described in the poetry.
"You think I am still dwelling in the past, mother?
I'm sorry that you miss someone you can manipulate
That fool is no longer here"
The above lines, hard and real life. Thank you for sharing the powerful poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks! I’m glad you liked those lines!

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile words shared and you are welcome

[Annabella]

Another really hard-hitting, emotional piece Ji-Suk. You always find a way to create these beautiful, seemingly simplistic poems that hit me at the core.
Never stop writing, you're amazing.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you for your kind comment! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

This sounds a bit like sweet revenge... I like it
The line: "You will we be abandoned"
Maybe cut out the we
Otherwise, it's great!

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[sette]

let the wounds start healing

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

It's hard though

[sette]

take it slow, think about happy memories and not sad ones to lessen the pain