Laughing Blue Sky

A pain of the children whom you murdered inside 

Why do you still breathe?

The child of agonizing pain beneath the havoc is the most profound of all 

Out of envy, hatred,loneliness�"anger is the heaviest of all

This laughing blue sky hides a horrible misery

You drown in your mistakes

Why do you still breathe?

Misery made you

In the bottom of the dark sea

Sorrow made you

Keep on atoning…And die in agony

Reviews

[sette]

and this wound will heal in time. anger is not a healthy emotions it makes you sadder and miserable try to create an outlet wherein you can use sublimation as both the defense and coping mechanism.

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

This is so good! I wanted to keep on reading when it ended! Very well written. *claps*

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Hahaha thanks! Maybe I should add a second part to it xD

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and hard statements. I wanted to read and know more.
"Misery made you
In the bottom of the dark sea
Sorrow made you
Keep on atoning…And die in agony"
I believe every deed, good or bad. We will pay for. Karma will demand payment.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks Although some karma has came to the people who hurt me and my brother c:

[Coyote Poetry]

Karma will take her payment and you are welcome.