To You

To You

A Poem by 송지석 / Ji-Suk

I don’t know why all of our
Hell-like memories are still in my head when I try to forget it
I will remember all of our past days,
How you played me
I completely changed because of you
I don’t smile anymore
Like before
I don’t care about love anymore,
My heart is all crushed
I tried my best to
Forget about you

I wanted to be greater
Than anyone else so you could regret our lost love and not being your son anymore
Our old habits hold me back
And I drown in your thoughts tonight,
That is like a nightmare
But I won’t forget, yes, I remember

Even with my eyes closed
The light that shined us is still there
I will keep our little precious memories deep inside
Even if pain comes along with the days
I will never forget those moments
I remember

I don’t know what you’ve done to me
Just like that
Forget it, I will never love you,
I don’t need anything anymore
Now I can fall asleep without you

The fact that you left me
Because you didn’t care about me
This reality drives me crazy
I’m hot stuff, I hurt feelings of people

This is my own way of living a meaningful life
The only thing that remained
Since you let me go,
Don’t ever look at me again

Even with my eyes closed
The light that shined us is still there
I will keep our little precious memories deep inside
Even if pain comes along with the days
I will never forget those moments
I remember

© 2018 송지석 / Ji-Suk


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You are too long winded. Consider being more economical with your wording.

I'd also consider finding some new topics to write on. 9 out of 10 of your poems are about the same exact thing. I'm starting to think you're just pandering to the emo crowd for attention.

Sorry for being honest, I'm sure you'll take it personal as usual... try not to though. You won't grow as a writer otherwise.

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Not everything critical of your work is inherently negative. Intellectually speaking you seem to be.. read more
 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

I have reported you. Any more rude comments from you will be ignored and reported.
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Reporting people for not saying what you want them to say is truly a cowardly move... not to mention.. read more
the angst is still expressed in this poem venting is a healthy action, healing follows

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on April 21, 2018
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