Burdens

I love my brother very much

You’re always smiling

But you look so lonely

Don’t hold in your tears

It’s alright, you and me

Put down your burdens

Just for a little bit, you hear me

If it’s not too late

I hope my cracked heart reaches your pained heart

Times I endured alone and you would tell me I did a good job for each day, my star

Whenever something is up

But you feel like no one knows but I do know your pain since we share the same blood

You endured until now so please take my outstretched hand

When you want to give up on something, I'll do it for you 

Thoughts keep growing

Words keep cutting you

And you ask yourself

Who is this even for?

Think about it, snap out of it

Don’t be shaken by petty words

Who is this even for?

So make a stronger promise to yourself

Don't kill your hopes 

You make me realize who I need 

Are they really deep inside your head? 

Do they control you like a little marionette? 

I'll cut the strings off you

Let me free the wings of your soul.

If it’s not too late

I hope my cracked heart reaches your pained heart

Times I endured alone and you would tell me I did a good job for each day, my star

Don't take all the weight by yourself, sometimes you cannot take everything for me

I'll be there hold on 

I believe that happiness comes in little doses

You always told me that but it’s not always easy

However, this time I will be holding your hand

If it’s not too late

I hope my cracked heart reaches your pained heart

In the night sky

I can see a particular shining star

To me, it’s exactly like you

I’m late but please understand

The words that I treasure every day

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Similar people can help each other. I liked the honest thoughts and the need to help another person. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

Wow, this poem is really good too! I like the hope that this poem conveys, and the way that it conveys it, gentle, soft, not forcing it. Good job!

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed reading it!