Me

Me

A Poem by 송지석 / Ji-Suk

There are so many hidden things inside my heart
It made me change so much, I am not that naive child anymore
It has trapped me 

The memories of love I threw away to protect myself 
They have been thrown away where only my outer shell remains
I want to escape the pain that chains me down and because of that; I am a cold person

My soul is filled with scars 
The pain you received for my sake, I want to find the real me that's not you 
But the bruises in my heart are too painful to handle
I try hiding it but they hide in my heart and keep me chained 

I met you on the other side of my bittersweet memories and your embraced me and made me become who I am 
You helped me get up despite my scarred heart
I'll never let go of your hand

I am trying to erase them memories once and for all, I'm trying so hard
I have trapped myself and I am trying to crawl myself out

What controls me isn't who I truely am 
What can heal me isn't strong medicine
It's just love

© 2018 송지석 / Ji-Suk


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I thought that it is going to be a sad poem, but it ends with a sweet note :). I really like the opening sentence of your poem, I think that is a problem which everyone kind of have. I guess the poem have a nice flow, but I feel like the end is a bit abrupt, though I like the ending too
Great poem ~

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
All of us are built by the bricks of life. We will be kinder or harder?
"What controls me isn't who I truely am
What can heal me isn't strong medicine
It's just love"
The above lines are true. Love can fix us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

Thanks! I am glad you enojoyed it!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome.
and i like how the poem ends so it is the right time to open your heart and love freely

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

I hope so c:
I like how it starts kind of depressing, but ends kind of sweet.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
writing is therapeutic it empowers us and that brings freedom

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

Yep it is c:

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Added on April 18, 2018
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