Why Is The Sky So Blue?

Why Is The Sky So Blue?

A Poem by 송지석 / Ji-Suk

Why is the sky so blue?
As if it's never known sorrow.
It always crumbles away
Life was born, some suffer and others live care-free lives  
There are also things that are full of pain

I am touched by your kindness 
The future we head toward together, we meet with unsullied strength
The sky is high with the wind singing 

I had a dream...
Someday man will attain his joy 
You believed this with such faith is in your childlike innocence 
I am forever by your side 
I want that your eyes will not be deceived 
By the world's sorrow 

We go forth toward the hopeless morning that causes neverending sorrow to many
I do not believe the world's kindness as it has turned its back on me and you
Therefore you were much kinder than anyone else

I am touched by your kindness 
The future we head toward together, we meet with unsullied strength
The sky is high with the wind singing 

© 2018 송지석 / Ji-Suk


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I love the transition in where you do not allow the darkness of the world to swallow you whole by allowing the incorruptible sky to carry you along. The ending is amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I’m flattered that you called it amazing!
amazing style you still have..
I liked the your way in shaping sentences

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Honest words and thoughts led to positive ending.
"I am touched by your kindness
The future we head toward together, we meet with unsullied strength
The sky is high with the wind singing"
I liked the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I like the lighter tone, it's cheery

Posted 6 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

6 Years Ago

I am glad! c:

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Added on April 18, 2018
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