Dream

Nobody cared for my dream yet I sought it out

All of the pains I had to face and my past haunting me still

I fought off the wolves in sheep clothing and stood up for what I believed in despite being told I was a worthless b*****d child by my own parents

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Dream'
ji-Suk,
Somehow the inner ember knows when something is not right. This inner ember which needs to bring light and receive light.An old fashioned word, 'conscience' can be grieved or can be a sense of good. We just know. It is within our design. We are moral creatures. I hope all good is found as you live and work and find purpose. Purpose is to live and move and have our being. I have found that God is real and that Jesus gave His life for someone like me...really for us all. We are precious in God's eyes.
Blessings,
kathy

[Wyrn Tiger]

Always seek out your dreams, Song. Their worth everything your are. Don't lose them their what make you, you. Their are people who will try to shrink you smaller then them so your not an issue to them. Tune out the people who put you done. Fallow your heart. Fallow your dreams and fallow were the pen takes you.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks! I will try to to!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard and truthful words written. I believe we learn wisdom when we don't allow the opinions of others to effect us. Worthwhile and powerful thoughts shared in the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks for your constructive feedback! I agree, but it's hard sometimes to ignore the opinions of others

[Coyote Poetry]

We must and you are welcome.