Where Are You

Where Are You

A Poem by Koiel
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I can’t feel you

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I look over my shoulder at the empty spot on the bed in which you used to lay with me. I look up at the ceiling with my blistering eyes that haven’t shut in days. My bones ache for your hands. Just a touch, just the tips of your fingers - that’s all I’d need. My ears twitch at the thought of your voice, so deep and soothing. I try to close my crusted eyes.
“The ocean baby,” you used to tell me. “Think of the ocean...”
I try to think of the ocean. But all I can see is you.
Where are you?

© 2017 Koiel


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This one seethes with grief. The last few lines are particularly moving. Good work, and may the pain one day pass.

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6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your comment. It lets me know people aren’t writing and feel it. Thank you s.. read more

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