Refuse

We will not quit 

Until we taste victory 

We will not surrender 

Until we change history 

Tonight when we fight 

We refuse to lose 

Tonight when we fight 

We make no excuse 

Because we will win 

At all cost 

Triumph is in the air 

Our enemies will feel the sting of loss 

So follow me 

And I promise success 

Until that day comes 

We will be restless 

Author's Note

Just a small poem that I wrote. I the Nebraska football prayer as inspiration. Tell me how you like it.
I also put it on video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vonTsMEa5k

Reviews

[noone]

It's a good little poem. I definitely get the sports team vibe from it. I could see it almost being like a victory or pre game chant.

[Mike Cole]

Yes that's what I was aiming. I modeled it after a famous one that they do at the University of Nebraska Thanks for the input

[Sam]

I love it so many directions you can take that. When I first read it I thought cool a battle cry for Christians. Now I see the team spirit. But I guess what is what makes a good poem when you can have more than one angle. Great job. God bless.

[RainDancer1997]

That's a very interesting and powerful poem:) It flows perfectly:) Great job!

[Mike Cole]

Thanks a lot :)

[Sheila Kline]

Yes, forge on towards the victory! Never give up, try and try again until success is yours! I like the short lines with a lot of punch to the overall meaning!